Proszę niech ktoś sprawdzi mi zadanie domowe

Mam prośbę czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić czy wiersz jest poprawnie językowo i ewentualnie poprawić, samo przesłanie się nie liczy jakby co chodzi tylko o sprawdzenie

At the Sumer I went to lake
But when I saw the snake
I ran to water and broke my leg
And after that I got a cake


Next day I was eating ice cream
And I was haveing a beautifull dream
But I dirted myself of cream
And I screamed, screamed and screamed


In the mornig, with my friend
I played the guitar, in his band
We were playin Sum 41 song
But my dad has comed


And at the summer I bored
Because I didn’t worked
I didn’t had a money for a parties
So i have been an artist

DURING SumMer I went to A/THE lake
>But when I saw the snake
>I ran to THE water and broke my leg
>And after that I got a cake
>>
>Next day I was eating AN ice cream
>And I was havIing a beautifuL dream
>But I dirted myself WITH cream
>And I screamed, (dodaj tutaj 'and') screamed and screamed - (lepszy rhythm)

>In the morniNg, with my friend
>I played the guitar, in his band
>We were playinG Sum 41 song
>But my dad haD come (zamiast come - lepiej 'arrived')
>
And DURING summer I (got) bored
>Because I didn't (lepiej hadn't) worked
>I didn't haVE aNY money for parties
>So (moze lepiej 'BUT) I 'could' have been an artist