opis dnia

sprawdzicie mi?:) bylabym wdzieczna

My day
Today I got up at 7 o'clock. I went to the bathroom to wash up my face. Then I drank a cup of tea. I made breakfast and then I ate it watching tv. I dressed up and switched on a computer. I have been surfing net till 10 o'clock and then I got to school. When I got home from school I had dinner. Then my best friend turned down. We talked and listened to the music. I did my homework and started to watch tv. I had a shower and I got to bed.

Today I got up at 7 o'clock. I went to the bathroom to wash up my
face. Then I drank a cup of tea. I made breakfast and then I ate it WHILE
watching tv. I dressed up and switched on a computer. I have been
surfing net till 10 o'clock and then I WENT to school. When I got home
from school I had dinner. Then my best friend CALLED/POPPED IN. We talked
and listened to (bez the) music. I did my homework and started to watch tv.
I TOOK a shower and I WENT to bed.

skąd wzięłaś "turn down"?

I have been
surfing net till 10 o'clock

I WAS SURFING...

.. to wash my face (nie wash up)

albo I washed up ( bez face wtedy)

wydaje mi sie, ze wyrazenie have a shower jest jak najbardziej poprawne.
bo to jest british english.
natomiast take a shower to american english.
wiec nie ma sesnu tego poprawiac.
no chyba, ze sie myle.

>I have been surfing net till 10 o'clock and then I WENT

Skoro wszystko działo się w zamkniętym okresie w przeszłości, nie będzie present perfect. Prędzej past perfect albo past continuous.

past perfect nie pasuje :>

Oczywiście chodziło o past perfect CONTINUOUS ;-) W sumie zdanie jest napisane tak, że chyba jednak past continuous bardziej pasuje.

w rzeczy samej :-)

z tym 'take a shower' i 'have a shower' to jest ciekawie. To jest tak samo jak 'have a bath' i 'take a bath' - wszystkie poprawnie, tylko moze z tym 'take...' to spotkalam sie w BrE ze to jest wiecej nie tyle formalnie, ale po prostu wymawiane przez osoby na wyzszym szczeblu. Zapytajcie jakiegos BrE nativa.