Proszę o sprawdzenie!!!

Dear Mr Johson
I am writing in respone to your advertisement in SUPER EXPRES on monday 1 st April of this year. I would like to apply for the position of waiter in your fast food restaurant. I need this job because i need maney and i love this job.
I enclose my CV with details of my qualifications and work experience.
I have nearly three years experiance of working as waiter. I am very ambitious and I like meet news people. I am outgoing and fit. I am very friendlly. Previous boss was satisfied obaut my work on his fast food restaurant.
I hope that i be become waiter in your fast food restaurant.
please contact me if you requise any further information.
Yours incerely
XYZ

Proszę o sprawdzenie, bardzo mi na tym zależy z góry dziękuje! Pozdrawiam:)

Dear Mr JohNson,
I am writing in responSe to your advertisement in SUPER EXPRES on
Monday 1 st April of this year. I would like to apply for the position
of 'A' waiter in your fast food restaurant. (I need this job because i need
money and I love this job.- tego sie nie pisze, tutaj to wychodzi bardzo ironicznie)
I have nearly three years experiEnce of working as 'A' waiter. I am very
ambitious and I like meetING news (new - znaczy nowych, news - znaczy cos innego-) people.
'My' previous boss was satisfied about (nie, tutaj potrzeba 'with') my work AT his ..
I hope that I (I piszemy zawsze duza litera) WILL become A waiter in your fast food restaurant.
Please contact me if you requiRe any further information.
Yours Sincerely
XYZ