Króciutki dialog. Czy ktoś sprawdzi?? ;)

Mam wielką prośbę czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić ten dialog?

- Hi Sarah!
- Hey!
- How goes it?
- Fine, thanks. I was in the cinema last week.
- Yea? What was the tittle of the film?
- Devil wears Parada.
- You kidding! How can you watched it without me?
- I thought you were on yours granthmother's birthday.
- No, I wasn't. I watched Bridget Jones' Diary hundredth time.
- I' m sorry. I didn't now. Next time I call you.
- OK. I forgive you. So, what was the film like?
- Oh, I loved it! But I think the movie was just too short.
- Seriously? I must watch it.
[...]

Błedy, które zauważyłam:rn -Yeah? - You're kidding - grandmother's

>- Hi Sarah!
>- Hey!
>- How goes it?HOW IS IT GOING?
>- Fine, thanks. I was inWENT TO the cinema last week.
>- YeaH? What was the tittle of the film?
>- Devil wears Parada.
>- You'RE kidding! How canCOULD you watchedWATCH it without me?
>- I thought you were onAT yoursYOUR gran[th]Dmother's birthday.
>- No, I wasn't. I watched Bridget Jones' Diary FOR A hundredth time.
>- I' m sorry. I didn't nowKNOW. Next time I'LL call you.
>- OK. I forgive you. So, what was the film like?
>- Oh, I loved it! But I think the movie was just too short.
>- Seriously? I must watch it.
>[...]

Dziękiuję wam bardzo jesteście kochani;)