Proszę o pomoc(sprawdzenie krótkiego wypracowania)

Mam prośbę: czy moglibyście kochani ludzie sprawdzić mi czy te wypracowanko mam okej gramatycznie? I napisać co mam źle, i jak powinno być? Plisek. Najlepiej szybciutko. Z góry dziękuję.

Topic: My favourite singer.

My favourite singer is Kate Ryan. Her true name is Katerin Verbeeck and she is 24 years old. She was born 22th July in 1980 year, in the Belgium. She sings pop and dance music in French and English language. Her moste famous songs they are: “Desenchantee”, “Je T’Adore” and “Alive”.
She was released a three records: “Different” (2002), “Stronger” (2004), “Alive” (2006). I very like her songs. My favourite songs are: “Desenchantee”, “Only If I”, “Je T’Adore” and “Scream & Shout”.

I proszę o wyrozumiałość, nie najlepiej idzie mi angielski.:)

Her real name...; was born on 22nd July 1980 in Belgium.; ...in French and English.; Her most famous songs are; She has released three albums; I like her songs very much;