proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka :)

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Witam
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej rozprawce
na temat zalet i wad robienia zakupów w hipermarketach

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Nowadays, walkabouts in hypermarkets are getting a form of spending free time. Instead, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing a shopping in this places has a lot of advantages there are also disadvantages.

There is no denying that in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food, household equipment, and other things. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like read labels and consider which product is more worthwhile to buy you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. What is more, people have bigger opportunity to find cheep original things because there are a lot of reductions and sellouts.

On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things, which you don’t need and, don’t want to but you buy it under the influence of the moment. Another problem is noise. Hypermarkets often are crowded and loud places. As a result, when some people have to stay in long queues or look for a parking place it makes them very stressed and annoyed,. Furthermore in small shops you can talk to shop assistant, he may give you advices about some products and share his experience with you. In supermarkets you don’t have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets will always have advantages and disadvantages. It seems that decision what that means for different people depends on personal point of view and style of life. If you want to you can go there it is your own choice.

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Nowadays, walkabouts in hypermarkets are getting (to cos brakuje) a form of spending (brakuje czyjego?) free time.
Although, doing a (bez 'a') shopping in this (this jest l. poj) places (places to l. mnoga potrzeba l. mnoga 'these')...
In addition, if you like TO read labels and TO consider ...
...opportunity to find cheep (nie cheep, zobacz jak sie pisze) original..
...you END UP BUYING things, which you don't need and, (dlaczego tu jest przecinek) don't want to but you buy it (it jest l. poj a mowisz o 'things', to l. mnoga) under the...
Another problem is THE noise. Hypermarkets ARE OFTEN crowded ...
..can talk to THE/A shop assistant, he may give you advice (advice bez 's')
It seems that THE decision OF what that means TO different people depends on A personal point of view and A style of life. If you want to you can go there (zmien to zdanie - moze cos takiego - The choice of whether you do your shopping in hypermarkets always remains with you.)
>dzięki
troszkę zmieniłam:

Nowadays, wandering around the hypermarkets is becoming a way of spending free time. Instead of, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in these places has a lot of advantages there are also disadvantages.

Doubtlessly in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food, household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunity to find cheap original things because there are a lot of reductions and sales.

On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things, which you do not need and do not want to but you buy them under the influence of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Often, Hypermarkets are crowded and loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed, Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to a shop assistant, he may give you advice about specific products and share his experience with you. In supermarkets you do not have this possibility.

In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems that the decision what that means to different people depends on personal point of view and lifestyle. The choice of whether you do your shopping in hypermarkets always remains with you
Teraz lepiej ,
znalazlam jeszcze to: ...product is (more worth - cos tu niegra) buying
..moze lepiej...product is worthwhile buying..
Terri dzięki za pomoc :)

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