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The most important sports in my life are skiing and road cycling. Why cycling? I and my two brothers love ride a bike. We ride always when we have free time and every day in summer. I wear helmet, gloves, special boost, CSC kit and I am ready to ride. When I start my travel I feel really good. I like when I see effect on my ride and keep fit. I like landspace, mountains, meadows... I love breathe deeply. When I ride I feel free, this is really exciting. I am happy when I can do what I love.
My next passion is skiing. Two years ago my father took me on ski slope and I thirsted to be a ski inscructor. When I go skiing I need helmet, ski suit, poles, skis, ski boots and ticket to ski slope. I am very exciting, I like feel adrenalin and speed.
All kind of sports are healthy and pleasant. We need sport because mi should improve. I think that everybody should sport because this is good occasion to be happy person. We should make sports every season and every time.


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I and my two brothers love TO ride a bike. We ALWAYS RIDE when...
I wear helmet, gloves, special boost (sprawdz jak to sie pisze)..
When I start my RIDE I feel really good. I like IT when I see THE effect OF my ride and I keep fit.
I like landspace,(nie, landscape) mountains, meadows...
I love TO breathe deeply.
Two years ago my father took me on ski slope and I 'thirsted' (nie, znajdz inne slowo) to be a ski inscructor. I am very exciting (chyba masz na mysli excitED), I like TO feel THE adrenalin and speed.
All kindS of sports are healthy and pleasant. We need sport because 'mi' (czy masz na mysli 'we') should improve. I think that everybody should DO sport because this is A good occasion to be A happy person. We should 'make sports' (co masz na mysli- make time to do sports?) every season and 'every time'(dlaczego every time?)