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„The saddest day of my live”

It was a beautifull May day. It seems that this day was regular day of my live.But 17th of May was the saddest day of my live. The day began like every other. That day begins at about 7 o’clock by eating breakfast.During breakfast almost suffcated fish bone. It just as well next to was my mother and she helped me. I went to school at 8 o’clock with my mother. When we were half way, the tyre was burst. I have to changed the tyre.I thinked that day won’t be worse, but I was mistaken. I missed Biology and Ms. X examine me on genetic because she hate me. I got F ecause I didn’t learn in home. After school I went to home also with my mother. We sayed in traffic because road was stuck by tanker. When we arrived to home, I was tired and exhausted. In free time I surved the Internet. When I rewievd Internet pages my coputer system was destroyed by computer vius. On that day evening I watched game of my best football-team in TV, and then they lost. It was the saddest day of my live.

"The saddest day of my live" 'live' SPRAWDZ w slowniku co to znaczy i roznice pomiedzy 'live' a 'life'
It was a beautiful May day. It seems that this day was AN ORDINARY day of
my liFE. But THE 17th of May was the saddest day of my liFE.
That day begAN at about 7 o'clock WHEN I WAS eating breakfast. During breakfast I almost suffOcated ON A fish bone. It WAS just as well THAT next to ME was my mother and she helped me.
When we were half way, the tyre was (bez 'was') burst. I have to
change (change bez 'd' albo I changed the tyre.) the tyre. I thinked (nie, slowo 'thinked' nie istnieje - to jest niereg. czasown sprawdz) that day COULN'T GET ANY worse, but I was mistaken. I missed Biology and Ms. X examineD me on genetic because she hateS me. I got F ecause I didn't learn in home. After school I also RETURNED home with my mother. We sayed (sayed' sprawdz co chcesz napisac) in traffic because THE road was BLOCKED BY A tanker. When we arrived to (bez 'to') home, I was tired and exhausted. In MY free time I surFed the Internet. When I rewievED THE Internet pages my coputer (chyba computer) system was destroyed by A computer viRus. On that day evening I watched
game of my best football team ON TV, and then they lost. It was the
saddest day of my liFe.