Da rade to sprawdzic?? :)

Jesli by dalo rade prosze o sprawdzenie tej pracy, :) troche sie nad nia nameczyl bo moj angielski zbyt dobry nie jest ale nadrabiam w innych jezychach :D Wiec jakby ktos mial odrobine wolnego czasu niech mi sprawdzi owe wypociny :D z gory dzieki i pozdro for all:D

Last holiday I spent in North Poland in Gdansk. I went on vacations with my group of friend. We was there two weeks. We went on camping beshide beach. Gdans is beatiful place, where times goes slowly and people are very nice. We after in summer over polish sea is fine: sun shines and rain does not fall.
There were my first holiday with out parents. First day wenn we walked after in Old Market and Long Trade, but my and my friend - Tom been robbed. We was fast forgotten it. Next we walked on beach allready, where we wnet every day and sunbathed. When I swim in sea appear shark. I was very scaried and ran to panic. In the evning we gone on city. There was great. First time during these vacations. Five days laters has come breakdown of weather. Wind blew sandy so, that it has abdycted tents., beafore we was bent. We must rented room in youthresort. Last two days of vacations were fine with out no prblems. Last day we, ve been packed and we went to the train stations, but we was late, beacuse train left.

Last holiday I spent in THE North OF Poland in Gdansk. I went on vacations
with my group of friend(friend to l. poj, a chyba masz na mysli l. mnoga - friends). We was (nie, nie, nie we was, I was, ale we were) there two weeks. We went camping beside THE beach. Gdansk is beatiful place, where times (nie times, a TIME) goes slowly and people are very nice. We (we? co to tutaj jest?) after in summer over polish sea is fine: THE sun shines and rain does not fall.
There were my first holidayS with ouR (czy masz na mysli z rodzicami czy bez- without-bez,) parents. First day wHEN we walked after (nierozumie tego 'after' tutaj) in THE Old Market and Long Trade, but (but? nie-) mE and my friend - Tom WERE robbed. (Napisz to zdanie po polsku - trudno zrozumiec) We was (nie, we was, moze WE HAD) fast (nie fast, a SOON) forgotten ABOUT it. Next we walked on beach already, where we wENT every day and sunbathed. When I swAM in THE sea A SHARK APPEARED.
I was very scaried (nie, chyba SCARED) and PANICKED. In the evning we WENT TO THE city. There (chyba masz na mysli THAT) was great. First time during these vacations (to jest tylko poczatek zdania, gdzie reszta?) Five days later THE WEATHER BROKE. Wind blew THE SAND AND IT abdycted tents before we was (nie, prosze, nie 'we was', to jest niepopr.- w ktorej ksiazce tak pisze) bent. (Napisz to zdanie po polsku)
We HAD TO rent A room in A youth resort. Last two days of vacations were fine without(WITHOUT piszemy razem) ANY prOblems.
ON THE last day we, ve (czy to literowka to 've')been (been jest niepotrzebne) packed and we went to the train stations,(chyba STATION -l.poj) but we
was (Prosze, nigdy nie uzywaj 'we was' - naucz sie tego, I was, you were, he/she/it was, we were, you were, they were) toO late, beCAUse THE train HAD left.

sorry że się wtrące ale teraz najlepiej używać WERE do wszystkich osób
I were
You were
He were itd

o, to ciekawe.
a dlaczego to?

Nie zawsze - jak mowimy o simple past to NIE.
np. I was at the cinema -zdanie ok.
I were at the cinema yesterday - czy to poprawnie?

mE and my friend - Tom WERE robbed- chodzilo mi oto, ze ja i moj kolega tom zostalismy okradzeni
First time during these vacations - rzeczywiscie poczatek, to czy moglbys dopisac tutaj cos
Five days later THE WEATHER BROKE. Wind blew THE SAND AND IT
abdycted tents before we were bent. - 5 dni pozniej przyszlo zalamanie pogody, wiatr wial mocno i porwal nam namioty, bylismy zalamani

...the wind blew so strongly, that it lifted/took away our tents. We were heartbroken.

uwazaj na uzywanie slowa 'bent' - to nie zawsze znaczy zalamany, tak jak drzewo, czy cos innego.

mE and my friend - Tom WERE robbed- chodzilo mi oto, ze ja i moj kolega tom zostalismy okradzeni, a to jest dobrze...??
First time during these vacations - rzeczywiscie poczatek, a co moglbym tu dopisac...

aha... dzieki za pomoc i sorry za moje liczne bledy ale angielskiego ucze sie od 6 miesiecy :) i jeszcze nie wsyztko sobie wpoilem co i jak ma byc :D