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Egypt is very attractive country. It is on the Mediterranean and Red Sea, in the Africa north-west and partly in the Asia. Many tourists visit Egypt because has very interesing and rich history.There are monument from antiquity:Pyramid in the Giza, Luxor, museum Cairo where is gold mask pharaoh, and many different monuments. There may also diving in the Red Sea and lokk beautifull, colourful coral reef.

Egypt is very attractive country. It lies on the Mediterranean and Red Sea, in the north-west Africa and partly in the Asia. Many tourists visit Egypt because it has very interesting and rich history.There is antique monument ; the Great Pyramid of Giza, Luxor, museum Cairo where you can admire the golden mask of pharaoh, and many different monuments. You may also diving in the Red Sea and look at the beautiful and colourful coral reef.

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Egypt is a very attractive country.It is situated in the north -east of Africa and surrounded by the Mediterranean Sea and the Red Sea on the north-east coast. Lots of tourists visit Egypt because of its interesting and rich history. It is famous for Pyramid in Giza, Luxor, museum Cairo where you can see pharaon\'s gold mask and other different monuments. Visitors to Egypt may dive in the Red Sea and admire beautiful and colourful coral reef.
Discovering this African country may be really a fascinating experience.
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Egypt is a very interesting country. It is located mainly in the northeastern Africa with a small part in Asia. In the north and east it is surrounded by the Mediterranean and the Red Seas, respectively.
The country is a popular tourist destination because of its rich history. There are numerous sites with ancient artifacts, such as the Great Pyramid of Giza, Luxor, or the Egyptian Musuem of Cairo where you can find the pharaoh’s golden mask.
The Red Sea also offers some great diving areas where tourists can observe the coral reef.

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