uprzejmie prosze o sprawdzenie...,

Możesz sprawdzić, jak chcesz coś zmienić, dodać, zostawiam wolną rękę, za jakąkolwiek pomoc serdecznie dziękuje, napewno bardzo mi pomagasz!!

A; Hi Mum! I love you so much you know. Do you?
B; Yes! I do
A; I’m very sad, but you can give me a happiness. So I have dream.
B; What do you thing about?
A; Mum, I know what you will say, but you must remember it’s very important for me. Ok…I want to have a dog.
A; It’s impossible. I don’t want have any animal at home. Do you know that have a pet is big duty. Who would be go with him to walk, who would clean his dish, who would play with that animal. I won’t have more problem, you are my the biggest problem.
B; Mum, why you say that. I promise, if I had a pet I would care for him. Every my friend have a pet, I haven’t. I don’t know what can I do in my free time.
A; You could more learn, your (oceny) aren’t so good.
B. Mum school is boring. If I had a pet I would be reliable. I think than my (oceny) at school would be better.
A; What do you know about dogs?
B; Mum, I read about them. I know that dogs are make perfect house pets. They are playful and extremely loyal to their owners, so they are good company for the children like me. And everyone know that dog is “man’s best friend”
A; What kind of dog you want to have?
B; I think about some kind of big dogs, which can guard our house, and our all family. I’m sure that this animal make you feel safe and secure. He would sleep in our garden.
A; Dogs need a lot of attention. You are very lazy!
B; No, I’m not. Dog would make me better son, and I would do my best if you agree for him.
A; I hate a dogs any dog. I can’t agree.
B; Mum, why? You broken my heart. I feel sad, so sad…
A; When I was small one of them bite me. Go clean your room than do your homework.
B; Parents never understand your children.

Nio i właśnie ten koniec taki trochę nie ma \"smaku\" masz jakiś pomysł, nie wymagam od Ciebie, że sam mi napiszesz, ale podrzuć tylko pomysł.

jest tam kto :-). Misie obudź Cie sie, już wiosna :->>>>>

Do dogs make good pets?

wydaje mi się że powinno być:

\'So I have dream.\' - so i had a dream

\'What do you thing about?\' - what are you thinking about albo what do you think about

\'I don\'t want have...\' - i don\'t want to have

\'Do you know that have a pet is big duty\' - you know that having a pet is a big duty

\'Who would be go with him to walk, who would clean his dish, who would play with that animal. I won\'t have more problem, you are my the biggest problem.\' - would be going, i don\'t want to have more problems



\'Mum, why you say that. I promise, if I had a pet I would care for him. Every my friend have a pet, I haven\'t.\' why do you say that, every my friend has a pet


\'You could more learn, your (oceny) aren\'t so good. \' - you could learn more, oceny=notes


\'Dogs need a lot of attention. You are very lazy!\' - dla podkreślenia przerobiłabym na \'...and you...\' albo \'...but you...\'

\'Mum, why? You broken my heart. I feel sad, so sad...\' - you\'ve broken jeśli już


\'I hate a dogs any dog. \' - za bardzo nie widzę tu sensu :p


\'When I was small one of them bite me. Go clean your room than do your homework.\' - when i was little one of them bite me? to nie czas present simple?, then


\'Parents never understand your children.\' - their children

może być źle, ale mam nadzieję że pomogłam lol

dzięki, za pomoc, znalazł ktoś może jeszcze jakieś błędy..., nio i cio z tym zakończeniem, wie ktoś jak mógłbym zakończyć ten dialog...., czekam na wasze wpisy

:-(

tu według mnie JUŻ JEST dobre zakończenie :)

rodzice nie rozumieją swoich własnych dzieci... dobre :)

pomysłu niestety nie mam, a co do błędów:
\'you can give me happiness\', ale lepiej byłoby \'you can make me happy\'
\'I have a dream\', \'so\' jest tu niepotrzebne, a czas teraźn. najlepszy
\'What\'s on your mind?\' byloby lepsze, ale \'what are you thinking about\' też jest ok
\'I don\'t want to have any animals\'
\'that having a pet is a heavy duty\'
\'who would go with him for a walk\' może też być \'who would walk him\'
\'I don\'t want to have any more problems, you are my biggest problem\' (przedimki i zaimki dzierżawcze wzajemnie się wykluczają)
\'why are you saying that?\'
\'all my friends have pets\'
\'I don\'t know what I can do in..\' albo \'I don\'t know what to do in..\'
\'you could learn more, your grades...\'
\'I think my grades at school would be better then\'
\'I\'ve read about them\' chociaż \'I read..\' też nie jest błędem
\'dogs make perfect pets\'
\'so they are good companions\'
\'and everyone knows\'
\'what kind of dog do you want to have\' a może \'breed of dog\'?
\'I\'m thinking about some kind of a big dog\'
\'and our whole family\'
\'such an animal will make you\'
\'a dog would make me a better son\'
\'if you agreed to have one\'
\'I hate dogs, any dogs\'
\'you\'ve broken my heart\'
\'when I was little, a dog bit me\' bit= czas przeszły od \'bite\'
\'then do your...\'
\'their children\'

dzięki mmk, naprawdę mi pomogłeś!! A co miałeś na myśli pisząc, ze zaimki dzierżawcze się wykluczają?? Niestety nie zrozumiałem Twojej uwagi...

Z tymi zaimkami chodzi o to ze Ty napisales \"you are my the biggest problem\" masz dwa zaimki kolo siebie \"my\" i \"the\" biggest. Powinienes napisac tylko \"my\"

nio dzięki, wasza pomoc okazała sie bardzo przydatna, oto wynik mojej i Waszej pracy, chciałbym, żeby jeszcze ktoś na to tylko rzucił okiem jak wygląda w całości.

A; Hi Mum! I love you so much you know. Do you?
B; Yes! I do
A; I’m very sad, but you can make me happy. I have dream.
B; What are you thinking about?
A; Mum, I know what you will say, but you must remember it’s very important for me. Ok…I want to have a dog.
A; It’s impossible. I don’t want to have any animals at home. Do you know that having a pet is heavy duty. Who would go with him for a walk, who would clean his dish, who would play with that animal. I don’t want to have any more problem, you are my biggest problem.
B; Mum, why are you saying that. I promise, if I had a pet I would care for him. Every my friends have a pets, I haven’t. I don’t know what do in my free time.
A; You could more learn, your grades aren’t so good.
B. Mum school is boring. If I had a pet I would be reliable. I think than my grades at school would be better then.
A; What do you know about dogs?
B; Mum, I’ve read about them. I know that dogs are make perfect house pets. They are playful and extremely loyal to their owners, so they are good companions for the children like me. And everyone knows that dog is “man’s best friend”
A; What bread of dog you want to have?
B; I’m thinking about some kind of a big dog, which can guard our house, and our whole family. I’m sure that such an animal will make you feel safe and secure. He would sleep in our garden. In the winter he would sleep at home, maybe in my room. I will always before and after school take him for his daily walk.
A; Dogs need a lot of attention but you are very lazy!
B; No, I’m not. A dog would make me a better son, and I would do my best if you agreed to have one.
A; I hate dogs, any dogs. I can’t agree.
B; Mum, why? You’ve broken my heart. I feel sad, so sad…
A; When I was little a dog bit me. Go clean your room then do your homework.
B; Parents never understand their children.

To jest ostateczny wynik;

A; Hi Mum! I love you so much you know. Do you?
B; Yes! I do
A; I’m very sad, but you can make me happy. I have dream.
B; What are you thinking about?
A; Mum, I know what you will say, but you must remember it’s very important for me. Ok…I want to have a dog.
A; It’s impossible. I don’t want to have any animals at home. Do you know that having a pet is heavy duty. Who would go with him for a walk, who would clean his dish, who would play with that animal. I don’t want to have any more problem, you are my biggest problem.
B; Mum, why are you saying that. I promise, if I have a pet I will care of him. Every my friends have a pets, I haven’t. I don’t know what do in my free time.
A; You could learn more, your grades aren’t so good.
B. Mum school is boring. If I had a pet I would be reliable. I think than my grades at school would be better then.
A; What do you know about dogs?
B; Mum, I’ve read about them. I know that dogs are make perfect house pets. They are playful and extremely loyal to their owners, so they are good companions for the children like me. And everyone knows that dog is “man’s best friend”
A; What bread of dog you want to have?
B; I’m thinking about some kind of a big dog, which can guard our house, and our whole family. I’m sure that such an animal will make you feel safe and secure. He would sleep in our garden. In the winter he would sleep at home, maybe in my room. I will always before and after school take him for his daily walk.
A; Dogs need a lot of attention but you are very lazy!
B; No, I’m not. The dog would make me a better son, and I would do my best if you agreed to have one.
A; I hate dogs, any dogs. I can’t agree.
B; Mum, why? You’ve broken my heart. I feel sad, so sad…
A; When I was little a dog bit me. Go clean your room then do your homework.
B; Parents never understand their children. THEY LEAVE NO CHOICE - I WILL HAVE TO PLAY SOME COMPUTERS GAMES INSTEAD.

wyłapałam jeszcze kilka błędów, oto poprawiona wersja:
A; Hi Mum! I love you so much you know. Do you?
>B; Yes! I do
>A; I\'m very sad, but you can make me happy. I have a dream.
>B; What are you thinking about?
>A; Mum, I know what you will say, but you must remember it\'s very
>important for me. Ok...I want to have a dog.
>A; It\'s impossible. I don\'t want to have any animals at home. Do you
>know that having a pet is a heavy duty. Who would go with him for a
>walk, who would clean his dish, who would play with that animal. I
>don\'t want to have any more problems, you are my biggest problem.
>B; Mum, why are you saying that. I promise, if I have a pet I will take
>care of him. All my friends have pets, I haven\'t. I don\'t know
>what to do in my free time.
>A; You could learn more, your grades aren\'t so good.
>B. Mum school is boring. If I had a pet I would be reliable. I think
>my grades at school would be better then.
>A; What do you know about dogs?
>B; Mum, I\'ve read about them. I know that dogs make perfect
>pets. They are playful and extremely loyal to their owners, so they
>are good companions for the children like me. And everyone knows that
>dog is “man\'s best friend\"
>A; What breed of dog do you want to have?
>B; I\'m thinking about some kind of a big dog, which can guard our
>house, and our whole family. I\'m sure that such an animal will make
>you feel safe and secure (a może lepiej w tym miejscu zamiast \'safe and secure\' wstawić taki ładny idiom \'safe and sound\'?). He would sleep in our garden. In the winter
>he would sleep at home, maybe in my room. I will always take him for his daily walk before and after school.
> A; Dogs need a lot of attention but you are very lazy!
>B; No, I\'m not. A dog would make me a better son, and I would do my
>best if you agreed to have one.
>A; I hate dogs, any dogs. I can\'t agree.
>B; Mum, why? You\'ve broken my heart. I feel sad, so sad...
>A; When I was little a dog bit me. Go clean your room and then do your
>homework.
>B; Parents never understand their children. THEY LEAVE NO CHOICE - I
>WILL HAVE TO PLAY SOME COMPUTERS GAMES

nie chciało mi się poprawiać interpunkcji:-)