Kto sprawdzi list z anglika?prosze

prosze o sprawdzenie listu ktory napisalam do kolezanki z wakacji prosze o poprawki
Dear Asia,
hello,how are you?I'm sorry I haven't written To you for such a long time.
I am in Torun on a short holiday. Torun is beatiful.The weather is OK.
I get up at 9 a.m and I go running. In the afternoon I go red books ang rollerblade. In the evening I surf the net or watch films. In the weekend I go out to eat something out and shopping.I was in the cinema and in the swimming-pool. It's great. On the saturday I go to a church.
See you soon. Best wishes.
Love Emilka

Z gory dzieki:*

Hi Asia,
,how are you?I'm sorry I haven't written to you for such a long
>time.
>I am in Torun on a short holiday. Torun is beatiful.The weather is
>OK.
>I get up at 9 a.m and I go jogging. In the afternoon I read books
>and rollerblade. In the evening I surf on the net or watch films. In the
>weekend I go out to eat something out and shopping.I was in the cinema
>and in the swimming-pool. It was great. On the Saturday I go to
>church.
>See you soon. Best wishes.
>Love Emilka

Komentarz: nie wiem czy taki był Twój zamiar, ale opisałaś typowy plan tygodnia.List mało entuzjastyczny jak na list do przyjaciółki ;) I ogólnikowy ;) Pozdrawiam

to list do kolezanki z wakcji potrzebny do szkoly:))Tak niestety pani kazala:))dzieki za poprawki pozdrowionka dzia