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MY STUDYING

Studies are the best time in life of every man. Everyone who graduated studies have a pleasant memory of them.
I am studying English Philology at PWSZ in Kielce and I am really happy that I got into here. I think that it is quite high level at this school so I am afraid if I stay here. I came studying English because I would like to be an English teacher in some school. I rent a flat in Kielce and I took to this city straight away. Everyday I commute to PWSZ by bus. I usually finish my lessons about 3p.m. and I am very tiresome after them. I have to be very concentrated on that lessons because they are in English language and I have to accustom to this langiage. I like this PWSZ very much. I have lots of nice people in a group and we support each other. We will go at Piłsudskiego street next week.In my opinion there is better there, because there is a language library and canteen. Even teachers seem really nice so I would like to stay here. The most I like learning gramatic and get to know new words. On Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday I have hard days because of lessons such as listening, speaking and writing. Many a time I was very angry when I cannot understand something. I hope that it will be better and my English will improve. I like Phonetics lessons because they are interesting and sometimes funny. On Tuesday I go on Physical Education at Mastkowskiego street and I play volleyball. There is a great sports hall. I love sport and I am glad that I have PE on my studies.
Studying on PWSZ is great and I think that all students agree with me. Styding English Philology is very difficult and demand lots of time but then ( ale potem to wszystko nam się zwróci).

A czemu nie używasz łączników?

MY STUDYING (Prosze to poprawic- tutaj ma byc rzeczownik - a studying nim nie jest.)

Studies are the best time in THE life of every man. (Zanim tak napiszesz to zastanow sie, czy to jest calkowicie prawda - nie, nie zawsze - sa tez inne chwile ktore sa 'best time of your life', dlatego, tutaj jest potrzebny ...probably..)
Everyone who HAS graduated 'studies' (niepotr) haS a pleasant memory of them.
I am studying English Philology at PWSZ in Kielce and I am really
happy that I got into here. I think that 'it' (ale co to jest to 'it' do czego to sie odnosi?) is quite high level at this school, so I am afraid (afraid czego?) if I stay here. I came studying English because I would like to be an English teacher in 'some' (lepiej uzyj A) school.
.. finish my lessons about 3p.m. and I am very 'tiresome' (zle slowo - prose zobacz to to slowo znaczy - tutaj TIRED) after them. I have to 'very' (czego to very sie laczy? concentratE (tutaj daj very...much?) on 'that' (albo THE albo THOSE) lessons because they are in THE English language and I have to GET 'accustom' (czas przeszly accustomed) to this 'langiage' (prosze popraw blad ortog).
In my opinion 'there' (zle slowo, tutaj potrzeba IT) is better there, because there is a language library and A canteen. Even teachers seem really nice , (przecinek)so I would like to stay here. The most I like learning 'gramatic' (prosze zauwazyc ze slowo to GRAMMAR) and 'get to know new words' (vocabulary). Cos mi to zdanie nie gra. Moze lepiej I like learning.....the most)
Many a time I 'was' AM very angry when I cannot understand something. I hope that it will be better and THAT my English will improve. I like Phonetics
lessons because they are interesting and sometimes funny. On Tuesday I
go 'on' TO Physical Education at Mastkowskiego street and I play
volleyball. There is a great sports hall THERE. I love sport and I am glad
that I have PE on my studies.
Studying on PWSZ is great and I think that all THE students agree with
me. 'Styding' STUDYING English Philology is very difficult and demandS (dlatego, ze 'it'- a 'it to 3 os l. poj demandS) lots of time but then
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