PROSZĘ :) !!!!!!

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I went along shops in a shopping centre, I examined shop windows, when suddenly I noticed that I was alone from the group. I finally had the leisure time. I could go where I wanted.
Tired I sat down on the bench. I thought what I was supposed to do farther. How I am supposed to find the group. I asked for help the man which just passed by me. Unfortunately he could see no group. I was bad and hungry. I went to the nearest boutique.

Proszę o sprawdzenie :) aha i jeszcze jedno jak będzie brzmmiało zdanie Nie przejełam się tym ?
I went along shops in a shopping centre, I 'examined shop windows' (na to mowimy...window shopping, I was window shopping), when suddenly I noticed that I was 'alone' SEPARATED from the group.
I finally had 'the leisure time' MY OWN TIME. I could go where I wanted.
I thought 'what I was supposed to do farther'. (cos tu nie tak, I thought of what I was going to do)
How I am supposed to find the group?.
..I asked for help the man which just passed by me..(Zzla kol slow - I asked kogo? o co? I asked a man who (o ludziacj nie mowimy 'which' passed me by for help)
Unfortunately he 'could see no group' HE COULDN'T SEE THE GROUP. I was
'bad' (nie, to jest zle slowo - bad-nie znaczy zly- zly to 'angry') and hungry.
Wersja alternatywna:

I was wandering around and window shopping in the shopping centre and suddenly realized that I got lost. The group that was with me disappeared, so then I thought - Don't worry, after all It is my own free time so I could get everywhere I wanted. Then I continued my stroll. When I got tired I sat on the bench and thought for a while what should I do in my tough situation. I presumed that It could be reasonable to try to find my group. So I asked a fellow which just passing by me if he saw something that might be my group but he denied. I became really pissed off as well as peckish so I got to the nearest boutique...
(what was afterwards???)

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