Proszę o sprawdzenie raportu :/

The survey which I carry out examines habits my schoolmates regards watching Tv. 3 boys and 7 girls take part in this quiz. In the majority of cases, answers are very similar. Regarding first question, a vast majority of quizzed prefer romantic comedy. Only two people choose historical drama. In terms of amount of hours spending in watching tv, no student watches tv more than 4 hours. In the majority of cases it's about 2 hours daily. The questionnaire showed that almost everybody usually watch film hits in their own houses. Only 2 boys often go out to the cinema to do it. As for favourite film, some of the people questioned chose The Lord of the rings. Other students's answers were fragmented. But in answer to this question results that almost everyone like fantasy film. Only a one person hasn't his favourite film.
In conclusion, the survey showed that my schoolmates's film fancies are in the majority similar. You may say that Tv is very important to young people in these days.

The survey which I 'carry' CARRIED out examines THE habits OF my schoolmates regards watching Tv. 3 boys and 7 girls 'take' TOOK part in this quiz. In the
majority of cases, THE answers are very similar. Regarding THE first question,
a vast majority of quizzed prefer romantic comedy. Only two people
'choose' CHOSE historical drama. In terms of THE amount of hours 'spending' SPENT in watching tv, no student watches tv more than 4 hours.
Only 2 boys often go out to the cinema to do it. As for A favourite film, some
of the people questioned chose The Lord of the Rings. Other 'students's' STUDENTS answers were fragmented.
But in answer to 'this question' (ale jakie question-cos tu brakuje) THE results ARE that almost everyone likeS A fantasy film.
Only 'a' (niepotr) one person hasn't 'his' GOT A favourite film.
In conclusion, the survey showed that my 'schoolmates's' SCHOOLMATES film fancies are in the majority similar.

Bardzo dziękuję :) Tzn. w tym 'co brakuje' :D chodziło mi o to, że we wcześniejszym zdaniu było, że jeśli chodzi o ulubiony film... czyli pytanie dotyczyło ulubionego filmu :)