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The world's Longest Marriage Proposal

All's well that ends well. This sentence proved correct in Cameron Kelly's life.
On 14th February 2006 Angie Kreiner got a book. I called : 50 Reasons Why you should marry me and 51 reasons why I should marry you.
It had 113 page (includes 44 pictures). It was the world's longest marrige proposal. Answer for it sounded: YES!

zdaje się, że:

On February 14th 2[tel]nie wiem czy jest jakaś zasada ale taka kolejność jest zdecydowanie częściej używana

"I called"?? - jeśli miał tu być odpowiednik "była nazwana" to "It was called"

It had 113 pageS ( includING 44 ...

THE answer for it ...


dobrze jeśli ktoś potwierdzi
pozdro

the answer (to it) was YES
sounded to polonizm, tak nie mowia po angielsku

February 14, 2006 on Valentine's Day. Angine Kreimer who asked Cameron Kelly to marry him by writing her a 113-page proposal and publishing it as a book has received a one-word answer: "Yes."Rather than simply kneeling, Kelly's proposal took the form of presenting his beloved with a book, titled 50 Reasons Why You Should Marry Me And 51 Reasons Why I Should Marry You. > tak też może być ;]

February 14, 2006 on Valentine's Day. (czy to jest zdanie?...zacznij to inaczej...On Feb 14th....) Angine Kreimer who HAD asked Cameron Kelly to marry him by writing her a 113-page proposal and publishing it as a book haD received a one-word answer: "Yes." Rather than simply kneeling, Kelly's proposal took the form of presenting his beloved with a book, ENtitled 50 Reasons Why You Should Marry Me And 51 Reasons Why I Should Marry You.

sorry, zacznij to inaczej...'On Val. Day, Feb 14th.....

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