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Cześć to jest moje zadanie domowe, miałem napisać wypracowanie/opis Harrisona Ford'a, jak mi poszło sami oceńcie. Miałbym do was prośbę o sprawdzenie. Jednocześnie zaznaczam, ze błędow moze być dłużo, pisanie to nie jest moja mocna strona. :-( Właśnie tak na marginesie, znacie jakieś ćwiczenia, które by mi pomogły pisac lepiej??

Harisson Ford is one of the famous actors in Hollywood. He plays in “Star WarS”, and “Raiders of the Lost Ark”, he was great in this movies.
He is tall, and well built man. On his face you hardly any wrinkles found. He has tanned squire face, brown eyes, and brown hair witch starting to turn gray. But its positive for him and he looks better and better. He always wear elegant clothes as suit, and tie. He likes look elegant, he doesn’t like sport clothes. He also is serious it’s mean that he hardly ever smile to people. So he is very mysterious. He is caring, he very like play with children and he care in his early tens his little sister. We can also say that he is private (nie wiem jak to można udowodnić). He works with environmental groups . In his free time he likes working with his hands and build things.
In conclusion Harrison Ford is very interesting person, and he is normal man, although he is the world cinema star. I like watch him in films because he does everything the best how he can.

Z góry thx!!
Moge zaczac, bo zbyt duzo czasu nie mam.

Harrison Ford is one of the most famous actors in Hollywood. He's starred in 'Star Wars' and 'Raiders of the Lost Ark' and in those films his acting was superb.
>Harisson Ford is one of the MOST famous actors in Hollywood.

He playED in “Star WarS", and “Raiders of the Lost Ark", AND was great
>in thESE movies.
>He is A tall and well built man. On his face you CAN hardly SEE any wrinkles
. He has A tanned squAre face, brown eyes, and brown hair wHich
IS BEGINNING to turn gray. But IT ACTUALLY MAKES HIM (EVEN) MORE HANDSOME He always wearS elegant clothes SUCH as A suit and A tie. He likes TO look elegant, he doesn't like sportS (albo: CASUAL) clothes. He also LOOKS serious - he hardly ever smileS AT people. So he is very mysterious. Heis A caring PERSON, he likeS plaING with children VERY MUCH and in his early tens HE LOOKED AFTER his little sister. We can also say that he is private (nie wiem jak to można udowodnić - ALE CO TO MA ZNACZYĆ???). He SUPPORTS environmental groups . In his free time he likes DOING SOME MANUAL WORK, LIKE CONSTRUCTING SOMETHING??
ALL IN ALL, MR (nie zeby Harrison bylo zle) Ford is A very interesting person, and he is normal , although he is A world cinema star. I like watchING him in
>films because he ALWAYS DOES HIS BEST NO MATTER WHAT HE IS DOING.
Poprawka ... likes plaYing with...
...and one more:

his early tEens
Dziex wszystkim którzy mi pomogli!!
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