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Mam ogólnie do napisania ''It's taking part not winning that metter in sport?'' czy sie z tym zgadzam.

Sport is an important part of our lives.
My favorite sport is swimming.
For me, swimming is important because it gives me a pleasure and it is a way to spend free time.
It's taking part not winning that metter in sport?
Broadly speaking, I disagree with this statement because I tihink that winning is more important.
Arguments:
1.Firstly, a lot of companies want to sponsor us.
2.secondary, we get a proposal to the advertising.
3.When we win we get big moeny and we are fame.
4.Futher,the country is proud of the sportsman
5.Futhermore, just taking part isn't enjoyable, winning make you feel self confident
6.when we win our dream become true
7.when we win we get to know important pepole of business
8. Newspapers is writing only about sportsman.

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