Letter

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Dear Sir,

My name is Mateusz, I am ***** years old and I am a footbal autographs’
collector. I live in a small village ***** in the centre of Poland. I am a
student of Public Gymnasium in ****. I like learnig and it takes me many free
time. I love sport, especially football and volleyball. I have two brothers,
their names are *** and ***. My dad is a carpenter, my mum is a teacher.

I am interested in football since 2000, when I saw first football match in TV.
I was very interested in this sport discipline. I have been buying football
magazines and newspapers to find out something about football. Then, I often
have been playing football with my friends and it was our favourite hobby. I
must to say, that I was one of the best players on the field and I have been
scoaring many goals in matches. Now, I eagerly play football, but I haven’t
much time. Recently I trained in nearby football club, but after solution the
section I stopped train. From start I dreamed to become a professional
footballer, but probably it is impossible to do.

You are one of those players, which I most admire and respect. I love watching
Your game and I with interesting observe your matches. I am under impression,
what You did and what You do for international football. I try simulate You,
because You are my football hero. I admire You for Your ambition and unusual
heart to playing.

I have been collecting autographs for only 7 months. I started in August 2006,
when I saw some internet site about collecting. I sent some letteres to
players and clubs, but without any successes. I was discouraged, but I still
sent and wrote letters. After couble of weeks I received my first replies. I
was proud of them. Later I regularly wrote and received letters and collecting
became important thing for me. Now, there are about sixty signed photos of
players in my collection. My dream is to get a few houndreds autographs of
famous footballers.

I have a great request to You connected with collecting autographs. From start
I dreamd to get a copy of Your autograph. Could You sign enclosed photo and
sent it to me? I will be very happy to add Your signature to my collection.

I wish You good luck and all the best.

Yours Sincerely,
Mateusz

Dear Sir,

My name is Mateusz, I am ***** years old and I collect football autographs.
I live in a small village ***** in the centre of Poland. I am a
student of Public Gymnasium in ****. I like learning and it takes much of my free
time. I love sport, especially football and volleyball. I have two brothers,
their names are *** and ***. My dad is a carpenter and my mum is a teacher.

I have been very interested in football since I saw my first match on TV in ((put in a month)) of 2000.
I have been buying football
magazines and newspapers to learn about football and I have often
played football with my friends as it is our favorite hobby.
I must say that I was one of the best players on the field and scored many goals in many matches!
I’m still eager to play football but I don’t have much free time. Recently I trained with a local football club….

?? but after solution the section I stopped train.???
Do you mean... (but after the regional results ??) I stopped training

From the beginning, I have dreamed of becoming a professional footballer but know it’s probably impossible.

You are one of the players who I most admire and respect. I love watching
you play and observe your matches with great interest. I am impressed with what you have done and do for International football and I try to follow your example. You are my football hero and I admire you for your ambition and passion for the game.

I have been collecting autographs for only 7 months. I started in August 2006
when I saw an internet site about collecting. I sent some letters to
players and clubs but without any successes. I was discouraged, but I still
wrote and sent letters. After couple of weeks I received my first replies. I
was proud of them. I regularly wrote and received letters and collecting them has become important to me.
I now have about sixty signed photos of players in my collection and my dream is to have a few hundred autographs of famous footballers.

I have a huge favor to ask you connected with my autograph collection. From the very beginning I have dreamed of having your autograph. Please, please, would you sign the enclosed photograph and return it to me. It would make me very happy to be able to add your autograph to my collection. Thanking you in anticipation.

I wish you good luck and all the best for the future

Yours Sincerely,

Mateusz