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Why was your holiday a disaster?

In the last summer, I went on holiday with my boyfriend to Władysławowo. This is very lovely city. We went there by train. We left the house at 500 o’clock in the morning.

My boyfriend rented a beautiful, small room in the hotel near Baltic Sea. Our room was charming and comfortable. We stayed there ten days. We spend a good time in a wonderful place. We ate in good restaurant, where food was delicious. We ate a lot of fish. A specially cod with chips and salad.

The weather was sunny and hot, but sometimes was windy. We were going to the beach every day, where we swam in the sea and sunbathed. In the third day we went to the funfair. It was very funny and excited. We met there some interesting next day we went with them to the pub. Every night I went with my boyfriend to the club. We danced and drank coca-cola.

On the Saturday and Sunday we sightseeing city, but it was complete disaster because, when go down the stairs in the museum I broke my leg. I didn’t want to do anything, because my leg very hurt me. I spend three days in room. My boyfriend looked after me.

We come back home by train. We waiting for next holiday and we go to the mountains. All the same I spend a good time.

Oto moje wypocinki : Bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów lub zamienienie szyku zdania lub podpowiedzenie jeszcze jakiegoś fajnego zdanka:

Z góry dziękuję

This is (brak przedimka) very lovely city.
We left the house at '500 o’clock' (popraw to) in the morning.
My boyfriend rented a beautiful, small room in the hotel near (brak przedimka0 Baltic Sea.
We stayed there FOR ten days. We 'spend' SPENT (czas przeszly) a good time in a wonderful place. We ate in (brak przedimka) good restaurant, where (brak przedimka) food was delicious.
'A' (iepotr) specially cod with chips and salad.

The weather was sunny and hot, but sometimes (tu cos brakuje) was windy.
'In' ON the third day we went to the funfair. It was very funny and 'excited' (zla czesc mowy). We met there some interesting (ale co? musisz napisac) AND (brak przedimka) next day we went with them to the pub.

On the Saturday and Sunday we (tu cos brak) sightseeing city, but it was (brak przedimka)complete disaster because, when WE 'go' (zly czas, tutaj czas przeszly) down the stairs in the museum I broke my leg. I didn’t want to do anything, because my leg 'very hurt me' (po jakiemu to jest, napisz to wg ang. gramatyki) . I 'spend' SPENT three days in (tu cos brakuje) room.

We 'come' (popraw) back home by train. We (tu cos brakuje) waiting for (brak przedimka) next holiday and we (tu cos brak-)go to the mountains. 'All the same I spend a good time' (tego zdania to nawet nie rozumiem). (na koncu napisz...I hope that I will have a good time there too.)

Ogromne dzięki za pomoc :)
Uważasz że jak poprawię te błędy to będzie mogło zostać :)?
Dzięki wielkie jeszcze raz. Mam małą prośbę,możesz pomóc mi jeszcze w tych zdaniach ?

A specially cod with chips and salad. ciemna masa ze mnie nie wiem co tu poprawić ???
The weather was sunny and hot, but sometimes ?? was windy.
We met there some interesting people and the(?) next day we went with them to the pub.
I broke my leg. I didn’t want to do anything, because my leg very hurt me to jak będzie że ona mnie bolała :P?
We came back home by train. We are (?)waiting for a next holiday and we ?? go to the mountains.
All the same I spend a good time to miało znaczyć mimo wszystko db spędziłam czas :)
'A ' (tutaj to 'a' jest niepotr) specially cod with chips and salad (i dodaj to do poprzedniego zdania)
The weather was sunny and hot, but sometimes IT was windy.
I didn’t want to do anything, because my leg very hurt me to jak będzie że ona mnie bolała :P? (to co napisales nie jest wg ang gramatyki...ma byc...because my leg HURT ME VERY MUCH.
We are (?)waiting for 'a' THE next holiday and we ?? ARE GOING to the mountains.
All the same I 'spend' (dlaczego piszesz ten czasownik w niewlasciwym czasie, to jest przeciez przeszlosc o czym piszesz, sprawdz ten czasownik i dowiesz sie ze trzeba pisac SPENT, ale to i tak inaczej piszemy, napisz...All the same, I HAD A a good time.
Ogromne dzięki za pomoc :) Z tym spend to nie wiem sama czemu :p Chyba przez to że pisałam na kompie dzięki jeszcze raz:)

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