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Use of legal and illegal drugs is pretty common in modern society. Most adolescents have tried them or they will try in nearest future. Sociologist attempt to find solution and causes of this situation, but it is complex phenomenon . I will discuss this issue in my essay.
There are many possible causes of early use of drugs. One of them is emotional negligence. Many parents don’t pay enough attention to own children, they are overwhelmed by work. Thus, the youngsters seek for their attention using drugs or they simply need some adventure if they feel really bored.
The very important factor is also peers’ pressure. Teenagers don’t listen to their parents and they are resistant whereas their friends’ opinion is crucial. And they are not able to refuse if they are talked into taking drugs.
Use of drugs leads to serious effects such as health problems, addiction which are extremely difficult to treat. Next sad effect is that teenagers cant imagine entertainment without drugs so when they become adults, they will probably still use stimulants and set a bad example to next generation.
It is difficult to find satisfying solution for this problem. One advice might be that parents should spend much time with their teenage children, , know their needs and problems and try to sort them out. Adults might make youngsters interested in some hobbies or outdoors activities then teenagers stop looking for dangerous adventure.
What is also essential, government should ban selling those legal substances using as drugs, the less legal drugs in society the most teenagers who don’t have easy access to them. Moreover, all drug dealers should be punished to avoid distribution of illegal drugs.
Drug abuse seems to be very complicated issue and difficult to struggle with, but it is necessary to fight with this problem to prevent youth and save their lifes