zaproszenie

Byłabym bardzo wdzięczna za sprawdzenie mojego zaproszenia. Mam nadzieję, że nie zrobilam dużo błędów. Z góry bardzo dziekuję za pomoc :)


We' d like to invite all teacher for end of school year party which is held on Thursday, 24th of June and starts at 5 p.m. in our school. The main part of the event will be an academy prepared by students. We hope you will be able to come.

PIsalas to za szybko nie myslac o tym

We' d like to invite all (brak przedimka) 'teacher' (teacher to jest rzeczownik l. poj, to w jaki sposob piszesz 'all' a pozniej 'jedna osobe?) for (brak przedimka) end of school year party which is GOING TO BE held on Thursday, 24th of June and starts at 5 p.m. in our school. The main part of the event will be an academy prepared by (brak przedimka) students. We hope you will be able to come.

dziękuję :)