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20th century is the beginning of television. tv today is present every day in almost every home. This is the most popular mass medium. We can learn from it to almost anything on any subject.
watching television is a waste of time? I think not. firstly, because we have permanent contact with the world. we are up to date with everything happening in the world. What is more thanks to various thematic channels we can gain knowledge in various areas of life.
Finally, TV provides a lot of fun, it allows spend time in a nice way - for example, when the weather does not allow to go outside.
In conclusion we can say that tv like most inventions can be very useful and use reasonably is not a waste of time.


z góry wielkie dzięki ; )
tv today is present 'every day' (TV to jest sam box, po co piac every day?) in almost every home. We can learn from it 'to' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa) almost anything on any subject.
'watching television is a waste of time?' (napisz to inaczej. Is watching.....?)
we are up to date with everything (tu brakuje 2 slowa) happening in the world.
Finally, TV provides a lot of fun, it allows (komu? czemu? psu? kotu? malpie? musisz napisac) spend time in a nice way - for example, when the weather does not allow (ale komu? musisz napisac)to go outside.
In conclusion we can say that tv like most inventions can be very useful and useD reasonably is not a waste of time.


z góry wielkie dzięki ; )[/quote]
Super, poprawione. Dziękuję.

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