Essay na temat dojrzewania

Witam

Potrzebuję na jutro zrobić essay o temacie "Adolescence is the unhappiest time in most people`s lives." Stworzyłem to, choć nie wiem czy wszystko jest, dobrze, ale niestety dopiero dzisiaj się dowiedziałem, że to ma być na jutro (powrót po chorobie :( )i związku z tym nie miałem za bardzo czasu. Bardzo bym prosił o sprawdzenie mojego dzieła i odrazu dzięki za poświęcony czas :)


Adolescence is a time of quite specific that every man needs to survive.In my opinion this time is not so much unhappy as it is a difficult period of life. In this time, teenager becomes an adult child slowly. He begins to think rationally and cease to believe in fairy tales (perhaps naive). More often thought of so far for him taboo topics (sex, drugs, kissing, the interest of the opposite sex), which is associated with a desire to try something with the "adult life". Unfortunately this is also the period when teenagers think that everyone is against them. Rejects parents because believes that it doesn`t understand. Often because they do not want to spill the beans who is also a teenager falls into depression. You simply can`t cope in the adult world. I have`t yet adapted to this life. He does`t know how to be. Seeking a valuing of others (friends, strangers). He tries at all costs to acquire friends (even the enormous cost), would not be alone. In my maturing quite a turbulent time. Teenagers have then become such a "storm of hormones." Can`t cope with the problems (in school, at home).They have problems with their peers. Overall are more sensitive to everything. Once a laugh and sometimes cry. They often change their tastes. There is, however, as worrying. Adolescence is a transitional period.

Pozdrawiam

Adolescence is a time 'of' (zle slowo, daj tu SO) quite specific that every man needs to survive IT.
'In' AT s time, A teenager becomes an adult 'child' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj jest niepotr) slowly. He begins to think rationally and ceaseS to believe in fairy tales (perhaps 'naive' (nie rozumiem do kogo/czego to slowo sie odnosi niepotr). More often thought of so far for him ARE THR taboo topics (sex, drugs, kissing, 'the' (niepotr) interest 'of' IN the opposite sex), which is associated with a desire to try something CONNECTED with the "adult life".
(KTO? co?) rejects parents because (ale kto?) believes that 'it' (o rodzicach mowisz 'it' - wstyd) 'doesn`t' (parents to l. mn) understand. Often because 'they' (nie rozumiem do kogo 'they' sie odnosi - teenager czy parents) do not want to spill the beans 'who is also' (nie rozumiem tego) a teenager falls into depression.
I haveN`t yet adapted to this life. 'He' (dlaczego skaczesz, raz 'they', raz 'you', pozniej I' a teraz 'he') does`t know how to be( how to be WHAT?) . Seeking 'a valuing' (zle masz ortog ale i zla czesc mowy) of others (friends, strangers). He tries at all costs to acquire friends (even 'the' AT enormous cost), SO THAT HE would not be alone. 'In my maturing quite a turbulent time' (to zdanie niema sensu bo jest tlumaczone prosto z polskiego). Teenagers have then TO become such a "storm of hormones."
Overall (tutaj brakuje KTO?) are more sensitive to everything. 'Once a laugh and sometimes cry' (prosze pisac calymi zdaniami a nie tak, nie rozumiem o kogo tu chodzi,a moze to jest tajna informacja) .
'There is, however, as worrying' (tego zdania nie rozumiem)