wady i zalety rozwijania sie turystyki

mógłby mi ktos spr? obawiam sie ze mam bardzo duzo błędów ale prosze o pomoc.

Nowadays tourism is growing up all the time. It makes some profits but also a loss.
firstly tourism brings positives, becouse unemployment is reduced. As a result of building hotels and restaurants, where allforeigners spent their free time.Secondly, the different languages are practise in real life, so we achieve new experience and we can use it in our work.Finally when we travell we can understand intercultural relations, sio we have better contact to other people.
On the other side, tourism may bring negatives for example when people are on holiday they forgot about cleanness hance there is a lot of pollution and waste.The other drawback is that superficial curiosity is satisfied. When we saw beautifull view we want to see it again and other do not interesting us. Finally the cultural aweraness is only skin-deep, so we can get over mistaken knowledge to others.
to sum up, the influence of tourism on world is up to us and to our behaviour becouse we can take the advetages of travelling but also we can bring a destroy for culture and environment.

Nowadays tourism is 'growing up' (nie to ma inne kolokacje, growing up odnosi sie wiecej do ludzi, napisz tutaj 'increasing') all the time. It makes some profits but also 'a loss' (jak dalas 'profits' w l. mn to dlaczego 'a loss' w l. poj?).
firstly tourism brings positives, 'becouse' (a co to za slowo? poszukaj i nigdy nie pisz tego blednie) unemployment 'is reduced' (napisz 'reduces). (tutaj dalej ze zdaniem) as a result of building hotels and restaurants, where all foreigners spent their free time. Secondly, the different languages are practiseD in real life, so we achieve new experience and we can use 'it' (nie rozumiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi, bo lang to l. mn) in our work. Finally when we 'travell' (ortog) we can understand intercultural relations, 'sio' (ortog) we have better contact 'to' WITH other people.
On the other side, tourism may bring negatives for example when people are on holiday they 'forgot' (pomysl, tutaj teraz.) about cleanness 'hance' (ortog) there is a lot of pollution and waste.
When we 'saw' (czas teraz.) (brak przedimka) 'beautifull' (ortog) view we want to see it again and other (ale 'other' CO?) do not 'interesting' (zla czesc mowy) us. Finally the cultural aweraness is only skin-deep, so we 'can get' (tego nie rozumiem) over mistaken knowledge to others.
to sum up, the influence of tourism on (brak przedimka) world is up to us and to our behaviour 'becouse' (ortog) we can take the 'advetages' (ortgo) of travelling (przecinek porzed 'but') but also we can bring 'a destroy' (nie, nie tak, napisz 'destruction') 'for' (zle slowo, tutaj TO) OUR culture and environment.

dziekuje bardzo za poprawienie. a co do ' Finally the cultural aweraness is only skin-deep, so we 'can get' (tego nie rozumiem) over mistaken knowledge to others.' chodzi mi o to ze mozemy przekazac błędne informacje dalej.

Finally the cultural 'aweraness' (ortog) is only skin-deep, so we 'can get' ('can get' jest tutaj zle, masz na mysli..can transfer/pass) 'over' (niepotr) mistaken knowledge to others.

a i jeszcze mam pytanie jak zamienic loss na l mn?

myslalam, ze mowisz o typowych ekonomicznym/finansowym profit and loss/profits and losses...ale tutaj chyba ci chodzi o advantages i disadvantages. Wtedy nie mozesz uzywac slowa 'profit' jako 'advantage....

i tam spenD their free time, nie spenT.

ok dzieki jeszcze raz za informacje i pomoc i porady, uwzględniłam wszystkie. Niestety pisze sporo prac do szkoły ale nikt mi tego nie sprawdza i teraz to tak wyglada:/