Krótkie prace do sprawdzenie FAMILY/WORK/STUDIES/LEISURE

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Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie tych 3ech krociutkich prac. Z gory dziekuje.

FAMILY
I don't have large family. I have a father, mother, sister and brother. I also have a grandmother and grandfather which live in the same village, so I go to visit them every day asking if they dont need any help. With the other grandmother I also maintain a good relationships.
My mother is an nurse in a local health centre. My father works as a mechainc in Siedlce. My sister went to university in Lublin this year. And my brother is only 5 years old so he goes to kindergarten, I am also his godfather. My grandmothers and grandfather are retired.


WORK/STUDY
I am a student of technical high school [taki znalazlem odpowiednik polskiego "technikum", jezeli istnieje lepszy, to prosze o napisanie] - subject: geodetist. It takes 2 years to graduate this subject. I hope that this studies will ensure me well-paid job in a future. I decided to went to this technical high school, because I find this job very interesting. Moreover, I think I will be a good geodetist, because I am accurate, responsable and well-organised person, and that's exactly how geodetist should be.


LEISURE
My 2 main hobbies are books and computer games. I read books since I have learnt reading and I have been playing computer games for 10 years, when my parents bought me my first computer.
I also like to watch movies (favourites genres: action, drama, crime and fantasy) and listen to music (mainly pagan folk and movies soundtracks ). I also like to spend my free time in an active way: in summer I like to go swimming (because I prefer rivers/lakes than pools), the rest of year I spend on doing some home workout like push-ups, pull-ups and crunches.


edytowany przez ragbrok: 25 sty 2011
FAMILY
I don't have brakuje czegos large family. I have a father, mother, sister and brother. I also have a grandmother and grandfather which live in the same village, so every day I go to visit and to ask them (tak lepiej) if they dont need any help. With the other grandmother I also maintain a good relationships.
My mother is an nurse in a local health centre. My father works as a mechainc in Siedlce. My sister started studying at university in Lublin this year. And my brother is only 5 years old so he goes to kindergarten, I am also his godfather. My grandmothers and grandfather are retired.

Wytluszczonym drukiem sa poprawione miejsca badz takie, ktore sam musisz poprawic.
Dzięki za uwagi, a co do pozostałych dwóch, to pomoże ktoś czy mogą zostać tak jak są?

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