recenzja koncertu

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The Rolling Stones is one of the best band in the world. It was created in 1960 in Dartford. Their last performance in Poland was in 2007, it was during A BIGGER BANG TOUR. When the band play, all the people jump under the stage and they have a fan. If you hear their music, then everything around you is total different than always. You feel the music.
It was on 25th of July 2007. In Warsaw, properly in Sluzewiec, there was a sunny day. The Rolling Stons band for the third time was in Poland. On this concert arrived over 50 000 people. Their songs tells about life, relation between people and about contemporary world. The audience quickly learned the easy words and everyone were singing.
The songs are extraordinary, spell-binding and sometimes also tear jerker. If you hear and understand the lyrics, you feel something like hot in your body. What is more, you want to dance and your legs start dance. Although you like different sort of music, you should take part in this type party. Rock and Roll is a music, which everyone should taste.
I sincerely recommend this band and every concerts of Rolling Stones. Despite of the members of the band are over 60, they can be interesting also for young people.
The Rolling Stones 'is' ARE one of the best 'band'(tutaj l. mn) in the world. 'It' (napisz do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) was created in 1960 in Dartford.
When the band 'play' (zle to ma byc czas przeszly) , all the people 'jump' (zly czas) 'under' (nie wiem czy to masz na mysli) the stage and they have 'a fan' (nie rozumiem tego). If you hear their music, then everything around you is 'total' (zla czesc mowy) different than 'always' BEFORE.
'It' ('it' ale co?) was on 25th of July 2007. In Warsaw, 'properly' (zle slowo, tutaj precisely) in Sluzewiec, 'there' IT was a sunny day. The Rolling 'Stons' (ortog) band 'for the third time was in Poland' (zla kol slow...were in Poland.... ) 'On' FOR this concert THERE arrived over 50 000 people. Their songs 'tells' (zle 'songs' to l. mn - dostosuj czasownik) about life, relationS between people and about (brak przedimka) contemporary world. The audience quickly learned the easy words and everyone 'were' WAS singing.
The songs are extraordinary, spell-binding and sometimes also tear jerkerS. If you hear and understand the lyrics, you feel something 'like hot' (co to? nie rozumiem) in your body. What is more, you want to dance and your legs start (brak slowa) dance. Although you MAY like (brak przedimka) different sort of music, you should take part in this type (brak slowa) party. Rock and Roll is 'a' (niepotr) music, which everyone should 'taste' (zle slowo).
I sincerely recommend this band and every 'concerts' (ale 'every' to l.poj) of Rolling Stones. Despite THE FACT THAT ALL of the members of the band are over 60, 'they' (czy tu masz na mysli 'members'- troche za starszy na nastolatki) can be interesting also for young people.

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