list o dofinansowanie

W Twojej szkole powstał pomysł zwrócenia się do firmy zagranicznej z prośbą o wsparcie finansowe waszego dorocznego festiwalu teatralnego. Napisz list do tej firmy, w którym zamieścisz następujące punkty;
» dane na temat festiwalu (od kiedy się odbywa, ile klas przeciętnie uczestniczy)
« jakiego typu przedstawienia są najczęściej wystawiane i kto je przygotowuje
• jakie są korzyści płynące z festiwalu dla uczniów i szkoły
• wyjaśnienie dlaczego festiwal obecnie potrzebuje dofinansowania

Dear Sir/Madame,

I am writing to ask you to cover a part of the costs of preparing the event which is organized in our school every year.
The Theatre Festival is organized since 1999 by the student who take part in additional theatre classes. The performances are about social problem.
As a result teenagers are able to help people who are addicted to something. They also know that they should do when they see a person on wheelchair ramp. The Theatre Festival is the reason of it why we are the only school in the city to be given the „School of the Year” award two years in a row.
As you see The Theatre Festival is very important event which is also helpful in teaching young people to be understanding and tolerant. This year we have no money to prepare it, because last summer we decided to renovate a gym in the school. I would be grateful if you could cover a part of costs which convenient to you. I am convinced that you understand the matter and it is why I am asking you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ

bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie.

Dear Sir/Madame, (slowo jest MADAM, - Madame-to jest kobieta prowadzaca burdel)

I am writing to ask you to cover 'a' (niepotr) part of the costs of preparing the event which is organized in our school every year.
The Theatre Festival is organized since 1999 by the 'student' (tutaj chyba l. mnoga) who take part in additional theatre classes. The performances are about social 'problem' (czy jest tylko jeden problem, tutaj l. mn).
They also know 'that' (zle slowo, tutaj WHAT) they should do when they see a person on (brak przedimka) wheelchair ramp. The Theatre Festival is the reason 'of it' (niepotr) why we are the only school in the city to be given the „School of the Year” award two years in a row.
As you see The Theatre Festival is (brak przedimka) very important event which is also helpful in teaching young people to be understanding and tolerant. This year we have no money to prepare it, because last summer we decided to renovate 'a' THE gym in the school. I would be grateful if you could cover 'a' (niepotr) part of (brak przedimka) costs 'which convenient to you' (nie rozumiem tego). I am convinced that you understand the 'matter' (napisalabym 'reason') and 'it' THIS is why I am asking you.