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On the occasion of my sixteenth birthday I decided to arrange the adoption. I invited the whole family. My mother offered me help in the preparation of food, but refused it, saying that I am almost an adult. The event was held on Saturday.

On Friday afternoon I started to arrange the menu. I planned vegetable salad, apple pie and whipped cream with fruit. I waited until my dad gets back from work I went shopping. I bought all the needed products.

From early morning on Saturday started great cooking. First cake. I found a recipe on the Internet, thus preparing it was not all that difficult. So I thought at the beginning. But after 1.5 hours to prepare wresznie I put it in the oven. Suddenly my mother came into the kitchen.
-It can help you in cutting vegetables. - She asked.
-No thanks, I'll be fine. Go to go. Such a nice weather. - Told and started chopping vegetables for salad. Quickly I made the whole salad. However, the provision of water poured out to me, so I improvised przyparawami. Then I washed fruits: strawberries, blueberries, cherries. Podzialiłam them to the bowls I wanted to prepare the whipped cream. But I forgot to give milk in the fridge, so śnietana failed. Pobegłam quickly to a nearby store. When he returned, saw the smoke from the window of the kitchen. Proved that the cake was gone. It was an unpleasant smell and a dark stone. I tried a salad. She was very salty and acidic. I could not podeć her guests. I was with fruit and whipped cream. I came n idea. Zadzowniłam to a nearby restaurant and ordered food. Gingerbread and Greek salad was at my house for 30 minutes. I put it on the table and waited for the guests.

About 17 to my house went whole family. Aunt, uncle, grandmother and grandfather and cousin. I got many gifts. We all sat down at the table and began to eat. Family could not get over that she herself is all prepared. I did not tell them the truth. I sat quietly, but I was proud of his idea. And so my sixteenth utrodziny dopiegły end.

On the occasion of my sixteenth birthday I decided to arrange the 'adoption' (CO?) .
My mother offered me help in the preparation of food, but (KTO?) refused it, saying that I am almost an adult.
I waited until my dad 'gets' (zly czas) back from work (brak slowa) I went shopping.

From early morning on Saturday (kto? co? mam zgadywacv?) started great cooking. First (daj tu pare slowo) cake.
OR so I thought at the beginning. But after 1.5 hours 'to' (zle) 'prepare' (zla czesc mowy) 'wresznie' (to napewno wiesz) I put it in the oven.
-'It can' (co to jest? Czy to ma byc pytanie?) help you in cutting vegetables(a gdzie znak zapytania?) . - She asked.
'Go to go' (nie rozumiem tego) . Such 'a' (niepotr) nice weather. - (o co tu chodzi?) told and started chopping vegetables for salad.
However, the 'provision of water poured out to me' (co tutaj tego nie rozumiem) so I improvised 'przyparawami' (sam poszukaj) . Then I washed (brak przedimka) 'fruits' (l. poj): strawberries, blueberries, cherries. 'Podzialiłam' (poszukaj) them to the bowls (tu cos brakuje) I wanted to prepare the whipped cream. But I forgot to 'give' (zle slowo) milk 'in' (zle slowo) the fridge, so (brak przedimka) 'śnietana' (poszukaj) failed. 'Pobegłam' (to powinnas wiedziec) quickly to a nearby store. When 'he' (zle o kim tu mowa?) returned, saw the smoke from the window of the kitchen.
Proved that the cake was 'gone' (ale poszedl sobie gdzie? o czym tu mowa) .
It was an unpleasant smell and 'a dark stone' (co?) .
' She' (o jakiej postaci tutaj mowa?) was very salty and acidic. I could not 'podeć' (popraw) 'her' (popraw) (brak przedimka) guests.
'I was with fruit and whipped cream' (tego nie rozumiem) .
'I came n idea' (tego nie rozumiem).
'Zadzowniłam' (popraw) to a nearby restaurant and (ale kto?) ordered (tu brakuje slowa) food. Gingerbread and Greek salad was at my house 'for' (zle slowo) 30 minutes.

About '17' (daj to poprawnie) to my house 'went' (poszli ale gdzie? no i dlaczego) whole family. (brak przedimka) family could not get over (tu brakuje 2 slowa) that 'she herself is all prepared' (to jest belkot) .
I sat quietly, but I was proud of 'his' (o kim mowa?) idea. And so my sixteenth 'utrodziny' (popraw) 'dopiegły' (popraw) (brak przedimka) end.


Prosze nie uzywac kiepskich translatorow, bo z tego wychodzi belkot ktorego nawet nie mozna rozszyfrowac.
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