'A' (niepotr) Work is 'a' (niepotr) very important in our life. We may do it in our house or in (tu brakuje przedimka) office. There is no denying, that working from home 'have' HAS (working has...nie working have) got lots of advantages and disadvantages. You have got a choice, OF 'when' (chyba masz na mysli 'where') 'do' (jak to jest pytanie to 'do' moze zostac, ale wtedy znak zapytania, inaczej niepotr) you prefer working.
It is obvious that, working at home 'have' (HAS, working has) (brak przedimka) positive impact on our life. We don' t come 'under to other person' (cos to niewyrazne...tutaj lepiej...we are not answerable to another person). We are independent and come up with our results 'in' (lepiej OF) (brak przedimka) job. 'It' (moze lepiej 'this') contibutes to our confidence and responsibility. We are planning what we want to do in (brak przedimka) appropriate time. It is very 'covnenient' (ortog), because 'we don' t have got' (to jest zle, tutaj 'we do not have') (brak przedimka) limited time of working. ....The fact that we don' t have a stressful contact with people....(to nie jest zdaniem, cos brakuje) . It may be a virtue for (brak przedimka) shy person.
On the other hand, dealing with professional staff at home may 'occur' (napisz 'be') destructive to our career as it involves some obvious drawbacks that people tend to forget about. Firstly, working from home may deprive you of homely, peaceful atmosphere in (brak przedimka) family, your being absorbed with professional (ale co? ) 'takes' (nie rozumiem) may 'way' (niepotr) annoy your spouse, which may result in 'weaking' (ortog) (tutaj daj 2 slowa) family ties. What' s more staying at home 'all being' (niepotr) makes you withdrawn, lonely and bored, which may decrease the effects of your work.
All 'thinns' (ortog) considered, it can 'be' (niepotr) seem that it is not to easy to find a perfect solution concerning the place of work. Working from home is more suitable to well- organised people 'while' (to sygnaluje dla mnie ze jest jakies porownanie, ale nie dokonczylas zdania...) those who are more sociable.