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Cześć :) Mam prace na lekcje angielskiego do sprawdzenia. Temat to : ,,Describe the latest embarrassing situation you remember'

One short look at her and I knew what kind of women she was : big, dreamy eyes, grin from ear to ear, outmoded hairband on her head, funny-looking jacket and old-fashioned brooch pinned to it, flannel skirt that only my gradmother would be sufficiently courageous to show up in among so many people. ,,She must be mental"- I thought despite knowing loads of people that did such experiments with their outfits, so i warded off this thought. When she started staring at the bus timetable I had a chance to have a better look at her without getting noticed. 'She is sad' - I thought. I also spotted she opened her mouth at least once in every minute as though she wanted to ask somebody a question. But after that, to my great surprise, she burst out laughing, first trying to repress it but after a while she apparently gave up and began to laugh at the very top of her voice.
-Please stop, my little baby is sleeping and she hasn't slept for so long, it's hard to put her to sleep- said a woman that was sitting right next to her, with the baby on her lap.
It didn't work - the laughing woman gave us all an asking look and kept on roaring with laugher.
- Please shut up or I will go for security - a sturdy man said irritably.
-She must be mental - I heard from somewhere behind me.
The baby girl was finally awaken and began to sob her eyes out. Her mother was looking desperately for any help. An old, frail man stood up, put his hand on the laughing woman's arm and, pushing her gently forwards, whispered to her : ,,Please go outside with me, don't resist, you are disturbing''. She smiled at him, stood up and left the room, hopping.

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