Narrative story

Witam,

prosze o sprawdzenie.

Joe sat on the crowded train, rehearsing his speech one last time. The head of “The UFO Convention” had appointed precisely him as the last speaker to close the debate on the topic of alien contacts. So the speech must be brilliant and unforgettable. Such an honor was not happening every day therefore Joe had prepared himself on any additional questions. It was 2 o’clock so he still had time to read all notes for the presentation. Joe focused on his speech so hard that he didn’t even noticed black dressed men walking toward him, carrying guns.
Suddenly he heard loud gunshots, someone grabbed his arm and pulled him aggressively down to the floor while a strange shouts started to come out of the loudspeaker saying: “Nobody move”, “Keep your head down”, “Stay calm and nothing will hurt you”.
The lights went off and the train began to stop. Everybody was panicking and you could hear the crying and quiet whisper of prayers. Then one man next to Joe stood up and unexpectedly demanded an explanation from the armed man. Never had Joe imagined that he would find himself in such a situation.
At first everybody froze with terror. Even bandits didn’t exactly know how to react but after a second, one of them came up, looked suspiciously on the daredevil, lifted a gun and ordered to wait and sit in silence.
Then, after hours of fruitless waiting for help one of the bandits took of his mask and explained to stand up and relaxed because this was only a military exercises. Everybody breathed with relief, only Joe screamed of terror when he looked at his watch realizing that he was late. Now nothing was consoling even the thought that at last he was free.

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Hej,

czy nikt naprawde nie znajdzie chwilki na sprawdzenie?

Bardzo proszę...

Such an honor (honour-BrE) 'was not happening' DID NOT HAPPEN every day therefore Joe had prepared himself 'on' FOR any additional questions. It was 2 o’clock so he still had time to read all (brak przedimka) notes for the presentation. Joe focused on his speech so hard that he didn’t even noticed (brak przedimka) black dressed men walking toward him, carrying guns.
Suddenly he heard loud gunshots, someone grabbed his arm and pulled him aggressively down to the floor while 'a' (niepotrz) strange shouts started to come out of the loudspeaker saying: “Nobody move”, “Keep your head down”, “Stay calm and 'nothing' (generalnie to mowia 'nobody') will hurt you”.
Everybody was panicking and you could hear 'the' (niepotr) crying and (brak przedimka) quiet whisper of prayers. 'Never had Joe imagined' (mozna tez...Joe had never imagined) that he would find himself in such a situation.
Even (brak przedimka) bandits didn’t exactly know how to react but after a second, one of them came up, looked suspiciously on the daredevil, lifted a gun and ordered (ale komu?) to wait and sit in silence.
Then, after hours of fruitless waiting for help one of the bandits took 'of' OFF his mask and 'explained' (zle slowo, generalnie tacy to krzycza) to stand up and 'relaxed' RELAX because this was only a military 'exercises' (tutaj l. poj - EXERCISE). Everybody breathed 'with relief' (lepiej...'a sigh of relief') , only Joe screamed of terror when he looked at his watch realizing that he was late. Now nothing 'was consoling' CONSOLED HIM even the thought that at last he was free.

Masz problemy z tymi przedimkami -

nobody move /third person?/

nie, bo tutaj chodzi o cos innego, to jest rozkaz.

So, a teach in UK would say to the students: Nobody speak. /?/

no tak