Internet - błogosławieństwo czy przekleństwo

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cześć, bardzo prosiłabym o sprawdzenie mojego tekstu o internecie. domyślam się, że jest wiele błędów bo robiłam to na 'szybko' bo pilnie potrzebuję pomocy. z góry dzięki ;)


The Internet – a blessing in disguise?
I think at the begging the Internet has to be just an easier and faster way to communication and gain information, but in time it has found more uses and irrevocably changed our lives. Most people just wouldn’t deal today without it.
One of more popular way of using the Net is an e-mail and video talk. The system enables the holder to send message or talk with someone by camera form the other hemisphere in just a second ( of course on condition that the receiver has also access to the Internet.) There are of course lots of bad things in that invention. We can blame the Internet that we are more and more lazy ,that that’s very dangerous place for children or that we meet there with anonymous vulgar etc.
In my opinion the biggest disadvantage of the Internet is that, that it often replaces another entertainment, real meeting and talking. Less and less people read any books or spend time with their family and friends in reality. It’s really easy to addict to the Internet, it has unlimited possibilities, the power of it is almost uncountable and all in all it’s hard to surely say the internet is a blessing or disguise.

I think THAT at the 'begging' (to jest zle slowo) the Internet 'has' HAD to be just an easier and faster way 'to' (zle slowo) communication and 'gain' (zle slowo) information, but in time it has found more uses and irrevocably changed our lives. Most people just 'wouldn’t deal today' (tego nie rozumiem) without it.
One of more popular 'way' (ale tutaj wymieniasz 2 - dlaczego nie masz l. mn) of using the Net is an e-mail and video talk. The system enables the holder to send message or talk with someone by camera 'form' (zle slowo) the other hemisphere in just a second ( of course on condition that the receiver has also access to the Internet.) There are of course lots of bad things in 'that' (nie dokladnie rozumiem do czrgo to 'that' sie odnosi) invention. We can blame the Internet 'that we are' (napisz to inaczej) more and more lazy ,that that’s (brak przedimka) very dangerous place for children or that we meet there with anonymous vulgar 'etc' (no ciekawe - jak ja mge spotkac etc na necie?).
In my opinion the biggest disadvantage of the Internet is that, 'that' (niepotr) it often replaces 'another' (zle slowo) entertainment, real meeting and talking.
It’s really easy to (tu cos brakuej) 'addict' (zla czesc mowy) to the Internet, it has unlimited possibilities, the power of it is almost uncountable and all in all it’s hard to 'surely' (niepotr) say (tu cos brakuje) the internet is a blessing or disguise.

The Internet – a blessing in disguise?
A the beginning the Internet was an easier and faster way to communicate and gain information, but in time it has found more uses and irrevocably changed our lives. Today, most people wouldn't be able to cope without it.
One of more popular uses of the Internet is to send e-mails and talk via webcam. The system enables the holder to send messages or talk to someone from the other side of the world in just a second (the condition being that the receiver also has access to the Internet). There are also, however, lots of bad things with regards to that invention. We can blame the Internet for being more lazy, that it’s a very dangerous place for children or that we meet there with anonymous vulgar etc (nie rozumiem?).
In my opinion, the biggest disadvantage of the Internet is that it often replaces other types of entertainment, meetings in person and talking. Less and less people read books or spend time with their family and friends in reality. It’s really easy to become addicted to the Internet. It has unlimited possibilities, the power of it is almost uncountable and all in all, it would be hard to say whether the internet is a blessing in disguise.
A powiedz nam, England, dlaczego odrabiasz za kogos zadanie?
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bo chce sie pochwalic znajomoscia jez. ang -