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"Describe a person you admire"
The person I really admire is my friend, Kate who is about my age. She is a ballroom dancer. She has danced since 6 years. She moved to our city last year and she started to go to my school. I first met her there.
Kate is a tall, slim girl with beautiful, long, straight hair. She likes wearing dresses, but she also looks great when she wears T-shirts and trousers.
Once I went to her home to ask her if she wanted to come for my birthday party. It was Saturday evening, she opened door. Kate looked very tired but she let me in to her room. I was very surprised when I saw that she had a lot of books on her desk now. She looked at my face and says that she always comes back home late at night and don't have time for learning in week when she goes to school and has training so she must do it at weekends. So Kate rarely go out with friends on Friday or Saturday evenings to the cinema or to the party. Only if she has time, she will go. She doesn't want to neglect learning. It is very good attitude.
I really admire Kate, because she has passion which she loves and has a lot of succeses and medals. But she isn't selfish and rude, she is very helpfull and kind person. Kate is also a good student with great marks. She is really hard-working and responsible girl. She deserves for admire.