Proszę o sprawdzenie rozprawki, nie zbyt mi idzie pisanie tego typu tekstów. Proszę o uwagi i poprawki
Temat: "Wady i zalety mieszkania w dużym mieście"
These days most people live in a big cities. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of livin in a big cities. (ze wstępem mam problem, nie bardzo wiem co napisać :( )
First of all big cities are very attractive. There are many shops, bars, beauty salons and department store. People have more choices, they can compare prices. They can also choose where they want to buy things. Many people from small towns and villages come to big city to go shopping, because there they can buy more things than at residence.
Secondly, in big cities there are more places to work. People don't have to come many kilometers to work. That work in big city is often better paid than work in small town.
The most important disadvantage of living in a big city is that there are more pollutiions, because there are a lot of cars and factories. There are often a traffic jam which makes difficult to travel by car or public transport. Pollutions have bad influence of the health of resident.
What is more in big cities people are more anonymous. They have more freedom. In big city are more thefts and conflicts with the law. Residents often feel unsafe, they live in fear.
All in all live in a big city have more advantages and disadvantages. I think that better is live in a village, because there are fresh air and any traffic jam.
(nie za krótkie to zakończenie? Może powinnam coś dodać?)
P.S. Często powtarza mi się "big city" nie bardzo wiedziałam czym to zastąpić:/
Z góry dziękuję za pomoc :) Na środę muszę to oddać.