list do koleżanki z Irlandi prosze o sprawdzenie

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Dear Keira

I'm writing to you because in your last letter you asked me how Sue is feeling after Mike left her. As you know she was very sad but now she is happy again! She started to go out and she discovered a new love!
His name is Tom and they met on David Guetta concert last month.They are together for two weeks now and I think that they are in love.
Tom is tall and athletic. He is very handsome. I think that the best in his temper is that he is always relaxed and calm.Tom influences on bad-tempered Sue. For example, one day Mike went to our club with his new girlfriend. Sue and Tom didn't be together yet.
Sue was got really angry. Luckily Tom was with us and she didn't make a scene.
Anyway, I think that their connection will be long because they are really happy together. And what are you thinking about this?

Write to me soon,
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Temat: Napisz list do koleżanki z Irlandi, żeby opowiedzieć o nowym Chłopaku kogoś z grona waszych wspólnych znajomych.

1. Podziel się nowiną i powiedz, gdzie para się poznała.
2. Podaj przynajmniej dwie cechu wyglądu opisywanej osoby.
3. Podaj przynajmniej jedną cechę jej/jego charakteru popartą przykładem.
4. Wyraź swoją opinię na temat nowego związku i zapytaj kolegę/koleżankę o zdanie.
I'm writing to you because in your last letter you asked me how Sue is feeling after Mike HAD left her.
They 'are' HAVE BEEN together for two weeks now and I think that they are in love.
I think that the best (daj tutaj slowo) in his 'temper' (nie, to jest zle slowo, daj tutaj 'character') is that he is always relaxed and calm.
Tom 'influences on' (to jest zle, albo Tom influences bad-tempered, albo 'Tom has great influence on bad tempered) bad-tempered Sue. For example, one day Mike 'went' CAME to our club with his new girlfriend. Sue and Tom 'didn't be' WERE NOT together yet.
Sue 'was' (niepotr) got really angry.
Anyway, I think that their connection will 'be' (daj inne slowo, LAST) long because they are really happy together. And what 'are' DO you 'thinking' THINK about this?
a jak bym zminiła koniec na taki czy to by było dobrze ??
I think that Tom is the best for Sue because he is always relaxed and calm . Besides this he is intelligent. For example helped her in learning.