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"Once upon a time in May I was sitting at home and I was so bored that I asked my dad to travel somewhere on a motor in the afternoon. He agreed because it was a perfect sunny day for such a trip.
About 3 p.m. my dad and I went on tour. We were riding on the motor for 2 hours. We visited Zakopane. One hour later we finally decided to go home.
Dad was safety leading the motor when suddenly we noticed that a car across the street was driving straight for us. The entire life flew before my eyes. Fortunately, dad reacted quickly and left him out of the way. It turned out that in that car breakers were spoiled. It stopped on a tree.
At the end me and my dad helped people in that car. There were two men and one woman. Someone phoned for the police and they came here 15 minutes after the accident. Luckily, nobody was hurt. We were a little frightened but we calmly went home. Unhappily, people from that crashed car had to buy a new one."