List formalny ze skargą - pobyt w hotelu.

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to complain about my stay in one of your hotel rooms between 7th and 10th of September this year.
I want to express my strong dissatisfaction with treatment and organize at the hotel.
Firstly, I was informed that my room has access to TV, but there was not any television. Secondly, in bathroom was mess. Toilet and floor were dirty, in closet was unclean towels. I was waiting 2 hours for Room Service. This is unacceptable! Furthermore, the room was not air-conditioned and this fact spoilt my whole free time.
Taking into consideration all the trouble I experienced, I hope I can expect a refund. I would therefore be grateful if you could consider a full refund of 800 zl.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ
P.S.
Bardzo proszę, aby nikt z Białegostoku nie kopiował tego listu. Z uwagi na własne bezpieczeństwo ;)
organize = organizować
was informed... potem nastepstwo czasow, np. had
w zdaniu z bathroom powinnas uzyc konstrukcji there was
podobnie w zdaniu o towels, ale tam w liczbie mnogiej
waited
Dziekuję za uwagi.
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