proszę o sprawdzenie dwóch listów ;)

1. Hi Matt!
I'm sorry i haven't written for so long, but I was busy. Thanks for your letter. How are you feeling? I hope OK. I'm writing to tell you my news.
Guess what! I've just moved to new house and I'm so excited because of that. My new home is cosy, spacious and very big. I have some new furniture. It is located next to a shopping centre, which you saw when you've been in my town recently. I'm glad that I moved house, because I have nice neighbours and I live near to the centre now. Will you come to my new house? I would be so happy! I hope we will meet soon.
I'm waiting for your letter. Say hello to everybody.
Take care,
XYZ


2. Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a discman which I bought in your shop on 20th July.
I had a lot of matters with that discman after I have bought it. It turned off and did not play loud enough. I gave it to the service , but it did not help. After that this discman works worse than before. Sometimes I can't turn it on and it still turns off. This is not my failt, because I did not use it much.
I would my money back, because that discman costed a lot of money and I have not any benafits of that. I am sending you a discman and a copy of a receipt.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ.


thanks in advance ;)

I'm sorry 'i' (zawsze duza litera) haven't written for so long, but I was busy.
How are you? 'feeling' (niepotr)?
My new home is 'cosy' (generalnie 'cosy' to cos w rodzaju 'przytulny' to wtedy nie moze byc 'big'), spacious and very big.
'It' (tutaj nie jest jasno czy odnosisz sie do 'house' czy do 'furniture') is located next to a shopping centre, which you saw when you've been in my town recently.

2. I had a lot of 'matters' (zle slowo, tutaj 'problems') with that discman after I 'have' HAD bought it.
I gave it to 'the' YOUR service PEOPLE , but it did not help. 'After that' (napisz 'Afterwards') this discman workED worse than before.
This is not my 'failt' (ortog), because I did not use it much.
I would LIKE my money back, because that discman 'costed' (nie, to czas. niereg, tutaj COST) a lot of money and I have not HAD any 'benafits' (ortog) of that. I am sending you 'a' THE discman and a copy of a receipt.

bardzo dziękuję ;)