Rozprawka - o internecie

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Nowadays, probably in every house is computer connected to Internet. People use Internet to do a lot of thing for instance: searching information or solution of them problems. A lot of them use it to make a new friends. Making friendships by net is good? Or maybe not?

The first advantage of using Internet to looking for new friends is that, we can meet a lot of people on social portals or communities what increase our possibility to make a new friends. Another advantage is that, we can easier find somebody who is interested in similar thinks like us and we can converse about our interests. The other amenity is possibility converse to other whenever we feel like it. Last but not least advantages is that, we can stay anonymous, nobody has to know who we are.

The most important drawback is that people on the net can write about themselves untruth informations and we can not verify it. An additional, we have not face to face contact what is a problem to make a real bounds. The another disadvantage is difficulty to make a long friendship based on trust.

To conclude, Internet is comfortable form to make a new friend, but in my opinion this kind of friends will never replace friendships created in normal way.

Nowadays, probably in every house THERE is (przedimek) computer connected to (przedimek) Internet. People use (przedimek) Internet to do a lot of 'thing' (l. mnoga, bo jak przeciez mowisz 'a lot of' to wyglada ze wiecej jak jeden) for instance: searching (brak slowa) information or (przedimek) solution of 'them' (zle slowo) problems. A lot of them use it to make 'a' (niepotr) new friends.
'Making friendships by net is good?' (zrob to jako pytanie, a nie twierdzenie ze znakiem zapytania)

The first advantage of using (przedimek) Internet to 'looking' (zle slowo) for new friends is that, we can meet a lot of people on social portals or communities 'what' (zle slowo) increase our possibility to make 'a' (niepotr) new friends. Another advantage is that, we can 'easier' (zla czesc mowy) find somebody who is interested in similar 'thinks' (zle slowo) 'like' (zle slowo, tutaj AS) us and we can converse about our interests. The other 'amenity' (ciekawe slowo ale tutaj nie pasuje) is (przedimek) possibility (brak slowa) converse to other (brak slowa) whenever we feel like it. Last but not least (brak 2 slowa) advantages is that, we can stay anonymous, nobody has to know who we are.

The most important drawback is that people on the net can write about themselves 'untruth' (zle slowo) 'informations' (popraw) and we can not verify it. 'An additional' (daj additionally,), we have 'not' (zle slowo) face to face contact 'what' (znowu ta sama kalka - nie rob tego, tutaj inne slowo) is a problem to make 'a real bounds' (tego nie rozumiem) . 'The' (niepotr) another disadvantage is (przedimek) difficulty to make a long friendship based on trust.

To conclude, Internet is (przedimek) comfortable form to make a new friend, but in my opinion 'this kind of friends' (pomysl, bo mylisz l. poj i l. mn) will never replace friendships created in (przedimek) normal way.

Masz problemy z przedimkami, bo nie wiesz jak ich uzywac.