Proszę o sprawdzenie - Rozprawka - "Wady i zalety korzystania z portali społecznościowych"

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Nowadays social networks such as Facebook or nasza-klasa are very popular. People can’t imagine life without them. Of course such portals they have their positive qualities, but also bad sides. We have to consider if pros, or cons are in the advantage in this case.
The main benefit is fast access to information. You can check what your friends are doing right now, or when are their birthdays and so on. You don’t have to worry about money on you cell phone running out – you can always contact your buddies for free and what time you want. Also if you have poor memory or you just loose someone’s phone number – it’s all up there. Moreover you can be in touch with your foreign friends or renew old contacts.
On the other hand, so much information available on the Internet for anybody brings the big danger. Your photos can be downloaded and used(illegally, but still), remade or published. The effect of frequent usage of this kind of portals is the isolation from the reality. To make matters worse there are many cases of addiction to social networks.
In conclusion, Facebook’s incredible popularity probably stems from the fact that we have increasingly less time and moving our social life to the Internet is very comfortable. Certainly social networks has its good points, such as maintaining relationships, and finding old and new friends. But we must remember that nothing can replace a face to face conversation.




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Byłabym bardzo wdzieczna za szybkie sprawdzenie pracy. Jak zwykle pod koniec półrocza zaczęło się walczenie o wyższe oceny, a ja właśnie mam wahaną sytuację i bardzo zależy mi na dobrej ocenie z tej rozprawki. (Mam jeszcze drugą którą właśnie zaczynam pisać).
Z góry dziękuję za wszystkie rady! :)

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