Never ending story...

Historia, gdzie co jakiś czas będę wklejał kolejne fragmenty. Proszę o sprawdzenie :)


To begin with, you have to remember that this story describes man who has never existed, nor in the real world, nor in the fantastic world. He is simply product of my imagination which the most respectful pundits were examining and have found nothing. Indeed, there is nothing…..
First of all, I would like to introduce the main character of this poem. It’s said that the main character should be courageous and intelligent, but mine doesn’t fulfill these conditions. He is just handsome. As for his wit, he knows a lot of good tricks how to encourage women to take a look at him or to jump into his bed. He is really good at it, and somebody says that he specializes in picking up girls.

The curious reader probably ask: “So why do you depict him in you story?” . Because beneath a mask of womanizer he is very romantic and sensitive man who knows full well his advantages and disadvantages. His soul is very sophisticated. Furthermore he seems to be a good guy who has acted in the wrong way as a insensitive man with big self-confidence. Besides, the main character doesn’t always have to be simple. It’s better for poem, if he isn’t.

Thus, he was born on 22th of July 1994 in small city Borki(you probably won’t find it on the map). In consequence of his place of birth, he has always struggle for moving to a bigger city. He’s dreamt about Cracow which seems to be an ideal place to live and work for him. Hence, he started to learn everything about Cracow, its history and culture and accordingly to his father, when he was 10 he knew all history of city including kings, presidents and commissars. Unquestionably phenomenal love towards the city caused him to take part in regional knowledge test about Cracow. Without any problems he won this competition and in result he moved to Cracow and has lived there so far.

A short story of his previous life which, I think everybody would agree with me, is not interesting maybe show us why he is so strange.

He is a director of enterprise which is planned to be impressively new and glamorous event. He used to learn the hard way how to earn money, and now he appreciates the value of money. When he was a child he used to be exposed to ridicule when he worked in the stable as an joker assistant. He worked just for holidays, but earned a lot of money which was enough to provide his basic needs.

Now his sole goal is to acquire knowledge and reputation in Cracow, because he wants to obtain an honorable citizenship of city. On the one hand his work brings his closer to this goal, but on the other hand his womanizer’s opinion moves him away.

Undisclosed nature, beautiful features and sense of humour make him a lot of friends. However, it’s more doubtful if his friends know him as good as he wants to be known. I don’t think so. They has never seen him thinking about future, wondering what will happen next time or next year at the same time? He’s taken deeply every failure and celebrated every successes which have been undoubtedly more that failures.

to be continued...

To begin with, you have to remember that this story describes (a gdzie przedimek?) man who has never existed, 'nor' NOT in the real world, nor in the fantastic world. He is simply (brak cos) product of my imagination 'which the most respectful pundits were examining and have found nothing' (tego fragmentu nie rozumiem).
As for his wit, he knows a lot of good tricks (cos brak) how to encourage women to take a look at him or to jump into his bed. He is really good at it, and somebody 'says' (zly czas, tutaj SAID) that he specializes in picking up girls.

The curious reader probably askS (reader asks): “So why do you depict him in you story?” . 'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'because') beneath a mask of (cos brak) womanizer he is (cos brak) very romantic and sensitive man who knows full well his advantages and disadvantages.
Furthermore he seems to be a good guy who has acted in the wrong way as 'a' (popraw) insensitive man with 'big self-confidence' (napisz 'an inflated ego').

Thus, he was born on 22th of July 1994 in (cos brak) small city (cos brak) Borki (you probably won’t find it on the map). In consequence of his place of birth, he has always 'struggle' (zla czesc mowy, to ma byc czas. czas przeszly simple) for moving to a bigger city.
'Hence' (nie za bardzo trafne, moze Therefore), he started to learn everything about Cracow, its history and culture and accordingly to his father, when he was 10 he knew all (cos brak) history of (cos brak) city including kings, presidents and commissars. Unquestionably (cos brak) phenomenal love towards the city caused him to take part in regional knowledge test about Cracow. Without any problems he won this competition and 'in' AS A result he moved to Cracow and has lived there 'so far' (lepiej 'ever since').

A short story of his previous life which, I think everybody would agree with me, is not interesting maybe WILL show us why he is so strange.

He is a director of (cos brak) enterprise which is planned to be impressively new and glamorous event. He 'used to learn' LEARNED the hard way how to earn money, and now he appreciates the value of money. When he was a child he used to be exposed to ridicule when he worked in the stable as an 'joker' (zle slowo) assistant.

Now his sole goal is to acquire knowledge and reputation in Cracow, because he wants to obtain an honorable citizenship of (cos brak) city. On the one hand his work brings 'his' (zle slowo) closer to this goal, but on the other hand his 'womanizer’s opinion' (napisz 'womanizing ways) move him away.

Undisclosed nature, beautiful features and (cos brak) sense of humour make him a lot of friends. However, it’s more doubtful if his friends know him as 'good' WELL as he wants to be known. I don’t think so. They 'has' (popraw to ma byc l. mn) never seen him thinking about (cos brak) future, wondering what will happen next time or next year at the same time? He’s taken 'deeply every failure' (zla kol slow, ale napisz..every failure to heart) and celebrated every 'successes' (tu l. poj) which (have been undoubtedly more that failures' (cos tu nie tak, of which there have been more than his failures.).

Masz problemy z tymi przedimkami. Musisz ich pokonac i sie tego nauczyc.

Dzięki terri za błyskawiczną odpowiedź, rzeczwyiście przedimki nie są moją najmocniejszą stroną :)

He has lived in an apartment in one of the most richest districts of Cracow. The apartment has 7 rooms including 2 livings rooms, kitchen, bedroom, bathroom, toilet and child room. There is also a balcony with huge balcony door causes the living room is bright.

Living room is well-decorated. There are chandelier above beige couch and two armchairs. In the middle of the room there is a glass table opposite TV set. There is a aquarium in the corner between windows and wardrobe. The chest of drawers is located in the opposite corner next to bed and some plants. There are some books on bookshelf and the bookcase under it. TV set is on the chest and under DVD player and small hi-fi stereo. The floor is made of tiles and panels.
The kitchen is full of household appliances. There are fridge, microwave, cooker and table. Bathroom is located next to the kitchen. There are a shower and a bath.

In the bathroom he has written his best songs which has never been registered. Actually, he’s written more than 600 hundred songs describing his previous life, unreciprocated love and some failures. He’s never written any song showing his successes or achieved goals. Why? This is why everybody calls him ‘stranger’. He doesn’t like telling about his successes rather than failures. The thrilling moments of his lifetime was well-described on paper and in every second he can recall, but he cannot tell about that to anybody. His peculiar nature is more complicated than everybody has thought. Contrary to popular belief, despite he’s got everything e.g. money, fame and girls, but he has never been happy. What does it mean ‘to be happy’? To him happiness means to spend time with loving people and never thinking about sadness and problems. Nevertheless it’s simple, he hasn’t been able to get it.

The apartment has 7 rooms including 2 'livings' LIVING rooms, kitchen, bedroom, bathroom, toilet and (brak cos, guess what...) child room. There is also a balcony with (cos brak) huge balcony door 'causes' (to jest zle slowo, za rygorystycznie z polskiego, tutaj 'permits') the living room 'is' TO BE bright.

(cos brak) living room is well-decorated. There 'are chandelier' (popraw, obydwa w l. mn) above (cos brak) beige couch and two armchairs. In the middle of the room there is a glass table opposite (cos brak) TV set. There is 'a' (tutaj 'an') aquarium in the corner between (cos brak) windows and (cos brak) wardrobe. The chest of drawers is located in the opposite corner next to (cos brak) bed and some plants. There are some books on (cos brak) bookshelf and 'the' (tutaj 'a') bookcase under it. (cos brak) TV set is on the chest and under (brak slowa) (cos brak) DVD player and (cos brak) small hi-fi stereo.
There 'are' IS A fridge, microwave, cooker and table. (cos brak) bathroom is located next to the kitchen. There 'IS 'are' a shower and a bath.

'In the bathroom he has written his best songs' (zla kol slow...In the bathroom...) which 'has' HAVE (bo sonfs to l. mn) never been registered. Actually, he’s written more than '600 hundred' (nie, bo 600 znaczy siz hundred, nie musisz pisac 'huindred') songs describing his previous life, unreciprocated love and some failures.
This is why everybody calls him ‘stranger’ (nie, tutaj 'strange'). He doesn’t like 'telling' (zle slowo, tutaj TALKING) about his successes rather than failures. The thrilling 'moments of his lifetime was' (popraw tutaj, 'moments' to l. mn i nie mozesz uzyc 'was') well-described on paper and 'in' DURING every second he can recall IT, but he cannot 'tell' SAY about that to anybody. His peculiar nature is more complicated than everybody 'has thought' THINKS. Contrary to popular belief, despite THE FACT THAT he’s got everything e.g. money, fame and girls, 'but' (niepotr) he has never been happy.
To him happiness means to spend time with 'loving people' (nie wiem czy masz na mysli 'ludzi ktorych sie kocha, czy ludzie ktorzy ciebie kochaja) and never thinking about sadness and problems. 'Nevertheless' (zle slowo, tutaj ALTHOUGH it’s simple, he hasn’t been able to get it.

Znowu te przedimki.

After long break, I'm back :)

This story depicts a specific person who doesn't know waht he wants to do in his life.

Jack is a sentimental man who seems to be more romantic than others people in his company. He doesn't like being in a huge bunch of people, nor in the center of their attention. He is just a shy guy with hugely developed soul. But his soul is his biggest problem. He's used to thinking about even the smallest and the least valuable situtaion for a long period of time, which causes that he's never taken appropriate and quick enough decisions. His plans has never happended and these failures have made him just more and more sentimental. He cannot speak with normal people sucha as me and you, because he tries to find an ideal interlocutor who understands him completely. That's why he cannot stand with his friends and he isn't comfortable with them. They are nice and they have never insulted him, but they aren't on the same wavelength.

But people that he wants to meet has never existed. I've never met a person who would be an ideal reflection of me. I suppose the won't exist in the future, because our society is spreading very fast and people are more and more diffrent from others. For sure, you cannot find such person in this world. There is a explantation why Jack attempts to creat his own unrealistic fantasy world. There are perfect people who always want to talk with him and has never got bored or unpleasant....

to be continued...

This story depicts a specific person who doesn't know 'waht' (ortog) he wants to do in his life.
Jack is a sentimental man who seems to be more romantic than 'others' (popraw, tutaj 'other') people in his company. He doesn't like being in a huge 'bunch' (lepiej 'crowd', bunch to wiecej, a bunch of bananas) of people, nor in the center of their attention. He is just a shy guy with )a gdzie przedimek?)hugely developed soul.
He's used to thinking about even the smallest and the least valuable' situtaion' (ortog) for a long period of time, which 'causes' (mylisz 'cuses' a 'results' tutaj 'results') IN that he's never taken appropriate and quick enough decisions. His plans 'has' (ale plans to l. mnoga - popraw) never 'happended' (ortog) and these failures have made him just more and more sentimental. He cannot speak with normal people such 'a' (niepotr) as me and you, because he tries to find an ideal interlocutor who understands him completely. That's why he cannot 'stand' (cos tu nie tak, mozna 'cannot stand his friends') with his friends and he isn't comfortable with them.

But people that he wants to meet' has' (popraw, people to l. mn ) never existed.
I suppose the (ale co? zapomniales napisac) won't exist in the future, because our society is spreading very fast and people are more and more 'diffrent' (ortog) (lepiej, people are becomining diametrically different to each other) from others.
There is a explantation why Jack attempts to' creat' (ortog) his own unrealistic fantasy world.

terri, nie wiem jak Ci dziękować :)

A stroy about Red Panda

A small Red Panda was born in Taiwan Jungle in 2006. She grew up with her siblings: two sister, five brothers and many kinsmans. She was shrewd and had never taken reckless decisons. She was pointed out as a future ringleader of group. She had aquired only good feedbacks, she was strong enough to carve out a leading position in the herd. She wa treated roughly and every rivals tried to point out her sore points. Chunk of her foes where so angry, because they'd got a fixation on beauty of her. They should have capitalized on her lower descent. But everything had been going in the good way, untill...

Everything had changed when he was caught by some chaps. She was veiled in huge hangar which wasn't avaiable to see by anybody. She mislaid her collar and didn't know where she already was. She thought that she was in North America, but it was just a fallacy. Indeed, she was in South America near Mexico City.

One day Red Panda came acroos another panda which was held in this hangar over two years. They were speaking for a long time and Red Panda got to know that her position is fatal. The huge influencee which this long conversation made on Red Panda resulted in suprising decision: she decided to address a bouncer. He looked stupidly and Red Panda assumed that his IQ level didn't exceed 50 points. She watched out a proper while for starting conversation. Her interlocutor wore black wellingtons, grey material trousers and sweater with a hoody. He had thick moustache and sideburns.

Red Panda came closer to him and started:
'Could you talk with my for a while?'
'What? Are you abel to speak? You are a panda.'

Red Panda was shocked. She couldn't suppose that he was so stupid. By the way, the converstion went on. In a result of meeting, she got a stapler with some staples and windscreen-wiper. Now she could wiped rain off the windscreen car, but these gifts were toatlly useless in her escape plan. Two days later she stole a pair of pliers and coffeee grinder. After a few weeks of collecting different things which did not seem to be useful, she finally began building a maching which should help her with running away. Profitable work, verifitable machine and certifiable mind of Red Panda turned out not enough to escape from the hangar. She was betrayed. Unforgivenable betrayal and readable evidence of this crime made her feel sad and lonely. She thought that nobody could ever rescue her.

She looked skinny, because she got only a handful of food, because after her unsuccessful escape attempt spiteful bouncer almost lost her job after mistakes. The one thing was curious: his worship Al Pacino caused that she could always speak with him about him.

to be continued...

A 'stroy' (blad ortog) about (tutaj brakuje przedimka, widze, ze dalej masz problemy z tym) Red Panda

A small Red Panda was born in (przedimek) Taiwan Jungle in 2006. She grew up with her siblings: two 'sister' (tutaj l. mn), five brothers and many 'kinsmans' (bardzo dziwne slowo, nawet jego nie lubie, moze kinfolk?). She was shrewd and had never taken reckless 'decisons' (ortog). She was 'pointed out' (nie, cos nie tak, nie za bardzo trafne) as a future ringleader of (a gdzie przedimek?) group. She had aquired only good 'feedbacks' (wg mnie to 'feedback'), she was strong enough to carve out a leading position in the herd. She 'wa' (ortog) treated roughly and every 'rivals' (tutaj l. poj, bo 'every' to znaczy 'kazdy') tried to point out her 'sore' (nie najtrafniejsze slowo) points. (przedimek) 'chunk' (poszukaj inne slowo) of her foes 'where' (to jest zle slowo, 'where'-znaczy 'gdzie', tutaj WERE) so angry, because they'd got a fixation 'on beauty of her' (bardzo dziwne okreslenie, czy nie lepiej...her beauty?).
But everything had been going (daj tutaj 'along') 'in the good way' (ja bym to inaczej, mozna 'swimmingly', albo 'perfectly), 'untill' (ortog)...

Everything had changed when 'he' (hello? wczesniej mowiles o 'her' a teraz 'him' - czy to 2 czy 1 panda?) was caught by some (daj tutaj ladne okreslenie) chaps. She was veiled in (przedimek) huge hangar which wasn't 'avaiable' (ortog) 'to see by anybody' (tutaj masz zle, trzeba...wasn't able to be seen by anyone) . She mislaid her collar and didn't know where she 'already' (nie rozumiem dlaczego uzyles to slowo tutaj, moze 'currently') was.

One day (przedimek) Red Panda came 'acroos' (ortog) another panda 'which' (ja dalabym 'who' bo to sa takie ladne zwierzatka) was held in this hangar (cos tutaj brak, slowo FOR) over two years. They were speaking for a long time and (przedimek) Red Panda got to know that her 'position' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo) is fatal. The huge 'influencee' (ortog, ale nie za bardzo trafne slowo) which this long conversation made on (przedimek) Red Panda resulted in (przedimek) suprising decision: she decided to 'address a bouncer' (cos tutaj nie tak). He looked 'stupidly' (nie, zla czesc mowy, jak dajesz 'stupidly to musisz dac rzeczownik po tym) and (przedimek) Red Panda assumed that his IQ level didn't 'exceed' (lepiej 'reach') 50 points. She 'watched out a proper' (tego nie rozumiem) 'while for starting conversation' (cos tu nie tak) . Her interlocutor wore black wellingtons, grey material trousers and (przedimek) sweater with a 'hoody' (hood, albo 'hooded sweater). He had thick (daj tutaj color) moustache and sideburns.

(przedimek) Red Panda came closer to him and started:
'Could you talk with 'my' ME for a while?'
'What? Are you 'abel' (ortog) to speak?
(przedimek) Red Panda was shocked. She 'couldn't suppose' (to jest zle, tutaj mozesz, couldn't believe) that he was so stupid.
'In' AS a result of (przedimek) meeting, she got a stapler with some staples and (przedimek) windscreen-wiper. Now she could 'wiped' (tutaj czas teraz) (przedimek) rain off the 'windscreen car' (nie, car windscreen), but these gifts were 'toatlly' (ortog) useless in her escape plan. Two days later she stole a pair of pliers and (przedimek) coffeee grinder. After a few weeks of collecting different things which did not seem to be useful, she finally began building a 'maching' (ortog) which should help her with running away. Profitable work, verifitable machine and certifiable mind of (przedimek) Red Panda turned out not TO BE enough to escape from the hangar.
'Unforgivenable' (popraw to slowo- cos tu nie tak) betrayal and readable evidence of this crime made her feel sad and lonely.

She looked skinny, because she 'got only' (zla kol slow) a handful of food, because after her unsuccessful escape attempt (przedimek) spiteful 'bouncer' (to nie najlepsze slowo, moze 'guard') almost lost her job after (przedimek) mistakes. 'The' (daj tutaj, However,) one thing was VERY curious: his worship (brak slowa) Al Pacino 'caused' (cos nie tak, daj slowo 'meant') that she could always speak with him about 'him' (daj tutaj 'the star', zeby nie bylo za duzo 'him').