używki - prosze o sprawdzenie

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Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie.


A survey conducted in Krakow, has revealed that nowadays alcohol and drugs are very popular among young people. The anonymous questionnaire revealed that the most of us have already tried drugs. Only 619 of about 4000 surveyed people said they had never tried drugs.
City officials believe that the survey shows the real situation because the questionnaire was anonymous and guaranteed privacy.
Director of the Centre for Addiction Prevention accuse of such a state of the parents. He believes that parents aren’t interested in yours children, therefore alcohol are drinking more and more young children.
In Poland drugs are illegal and alcohol is available for eighteen years.
mam wrażenie że pierwszą część napisał ktoś inny niż drugą,
"accuse of such a state of the parents" accuse the parents of.....
"yours children" - their
"alcohol are drinking more and more young children" - alkohol is drinked by.....
"alcohol is available for eighteen years" - alkohol is allowed for 18 year olds
Only 619 ___ of about 4000 surveyed ...
alCohol is correct:)
edytowany przez fui_eu: 05 mar 2012
nie ma formy drinked
accuse - nie ta forma ale ja bym zmienil na inne slowo
jak juz kradniesz polowe tego tekstu, to idz i ukradnij reszte. Wstydz sie.
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