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Dear Mrs Kate
I work as a volunter at the shelter for two weeks, because I want to help the vulnerable and absued animals. This job is difficult becausec it requires a lot of sacrifices. I have to be responsible since the job requires it. I feel terrible when I see tortured and abandoned animals. I want to help the animals and watch as they become more open to people. It makes me much joy and satisfaction. Once, when I came to the shelter of my favorite dog I saw lightning. He was bitten by another dog which was in a cage. Suffered a lot and was asleep. I cried all the time thinking about it.(To encourage people to adopt animals need to set up a website. Schools should encourage students to visit the animal shelter. We must organize parties to Encourage the Adoption of homeless animals.) to nie wiem czy dobrze sformułowałem chodziło mi oto proszę os sugestię (Aby zachecić ludzi do adopcji zwierząt powinniśmy założyć stronę internetową. Szkoły powinny zachęcać uczniów do odwiedzin schroniska dla zwierząt. Musimy organizować imprezy w celu zachęcenia do przyjęcia bezdomnych zwierząt.

I 'work' (to jest zly czas) as a volunter at the shelter for two weeks, because I want to help the vulnerable and 'absued' (blad ortog) animals. This job is difficult 'becausec' (ortog) it requires a lot of sacrifices. I have to be responsible (tutaj pytanie za co?) a jak mowisz o sobie to..a responsible person) since the job requires it.
It 'makes' (zle slowo, tutaj 'daje' a nie 'robi') me much joy and satisfaction. Once, when I came to the 'shelter' (cos mi tu nie pasuje) of my favorite dog I saw lightning.
(kto? co? musisz napisac) suffered a lot and was asleep.
To encourage people to adopt animals (kto co? ) 'need' (zle, napisz 'should-powinnismy) to set up a website.

To encourage people to adopt animals - chodziło mi Aby zachęcić ludzi do adopcji zwierząt Źle jest ??

I have to be responsible since the job requires it. Chodziło mi o to że ''Muszę być odpowiedzialny bo ta praca to wymaga. Możesz zasugerować inne tłumaczenie jak to jest źle.