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Hello Daria

How are you? I'm busy this weekend. I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. Thanks for your letter. It was very interesting and funny. I would like to write about my sister.

My sister will work in Germany. In the largest city in Berlin. Ewelina will work in the biggest shop in Germany. She loves fashion, therefore Ewelina at once adopted offer job. It is a very well - paid work. My sister will work from Monday to Friday. She gets free flat and car for work.

I'm looking forward to hearing you soon.

Kisses XYZ

Ewelina at once adopted offer job - accepted a job offer,
She gets free flat and car for work - tu bym użyła innego czasu, bo albo dopiero dostanie, albo już dostała

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

+ do tego jeszcze ... She got down to work because, she had the best qualifications

ivonne - dostanie :) faktycznie

got down to work = zabrala sie do pracy

a jak to zmienić na - ona dostała tą prace, ponieważ miała najlepsze kwalifikacje?

może napisz: she is getting, żeby nie powielać tego will
to do tego co ja napisałam

ok :)

She is getting free flat and car for work ?

She is getting free flat and _______ car for work
Przedimki? Napisz w sensie: sluzbowy samochod