Do schools prepare young people for real world? Forma: artykuł

Witam, proszę o sprawdzenie artykułu. Zdaję sobie sprawę, że jeszcze wiele muszę się nauczyć w zakresie formy/gramatyki czy doboru słownictwa, ale póki co jestem na takim poziomie...

Contemporary world is changing more and more and no one is ready to face the reality after graduating. [is there better to use graduation?] Let's think who plays the significant role in preparing young people for the real world? Of course, I except that you will specify, for example, parents, friends though I would like to focus on the role of schools in this area. (w tej sprawie/kwestii)
First of all, smart teachers or lecturers can show the young the direct they should follow. Claryfing what is important in life can help them making right decision. Assuming, of course, that students aren't unresponsive to their talks.
Furthermore school gives us opportunity to cooperate with other people. It is ability which can affect our behaviour at work. Dealing with others involve patience, good manners and confidence. School is undeniably good place to get familiar to it.
What's more, we should take into account the fact that school learn us to take our responsibilities seriously. Although school duty aren't as important as those we will have to copy in adult life, they are an excellent lesson to learn responsibility.
To sum up, we can't say we aren't prepared by schools for the real life at all. Of course, school life doesn't reflect the real one as well. Giving us knowledge on particular subjects meets with teaching us respect, responsibility and hard-working. Teachers point out a right path, but there are still many things we have to learn from our mistakes.

Contemporary world is changing 'more and more' (ja dalabym 'constantly' i przed changing) and no one is ready to face 'the' (niepotr) reality after graduating.
'Let's think' (Let's not - dlaczego mnie wciagasz w ten tekst - napisz to bezosobowo, ja nie chce teraz o tym myslec) who 'plays' (lepsze slowo 'is responsible for') the significant role in preparing young people for the real world? Of course, 'I' (tutaj mozesz uzyc ..one can accept) 'except' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo, nie myl sie) that 'you will' (po co to 'you' ja niczego nie 'will) specify, for example, parents, friends though I would like to focus on the role of schools in this 'area' (moze inne slowo).
First of all, 'smart' (to znaczy jacy? ci w suits?) teachers or lecturers can show the young the 'direct' (to jest zle slowo-pomysl jak to ma byc po polsku) they 'should' (should jest za 'ciezko' mozna tyylko im 'sugerowac' a nie zmuszac') follow. 'Claryfing' (ortog) what is important in life can help them 'making' (zle slowo) (a gdzie przedimek? poszedl na studia:-) 'right' (to jest za roznoznaczne slowo, poszukaj inne) decision. Assuming, of course, that students 'aren't' (prosze to pisac w calosci, nie dajemy takich dziwactw w formalnym tekscie) unresponsive to their talks.
Furthermore (a gdzie przedimek?) school gives 'us' (mnie i tobie, czy im?) (a gdzie przedimek, teraz juz na mgr?) opportunity to cooperate with other people. It is (tu cos brak) ability which can affect our behaviour at work. Dealing with others 'involve' (tutaj 3os.l.poj - prosze nie robic takich podstawowych bledow) patience, good manners and confidence. (przedimek) school is undeniably (przedimek) good place to get familiar 'to' (zle slowo) it.
What's more, 'we' (a dlaczego mnie wlaczasz do tego, pisz bezimmiennie) should take into account the fact that school 'learn' CO? od kiedy? a teacher teaches, a pupil learns) 'us' (popraw) to take our responsibilities seriously. Although 'school' (popraw cos brakuje) duty 'aren't' (w calosci, bo i tak masz zle, mieszasz l. poj a l. mn) as important as those we will have to 'copy' (poszukaj inne slowo) in adult life, 'they are' (nie, to niema sensu, pomysl i popraw) an excellent lesson to learn responsibility.
To sum up, 'we' (popraw, bo przeciez nie mowisz o mnie i tobie, tylko o nich) can't say 'we' (popraw) 'aren't' (popraw) prepared by schools for 'the' (niepotr) real life at all. Of course, school life doesn't reflect the real one 'as well' (as well as WHAT?). Giving us knowledge on particular subjects 'meets' (poszukaj inne slowo) with teaching us respect, responsibility and 'hard-working' (popraw). Teachers point out 'a' THE right path, but there are still many things we have to learn from our mistakes.

Napisz to bezosobowo, bezimmiennie, nie trzeba uzywac 'us, we' tylko cos innego, popraw i poprawie dalej.