Proszę o sprawdzenie letter of complaint

Dear Sir/ Madam

I am writting to make a complaint about your’s advertisement „Kim’s Wonder diet” posted on news paper. I am dissatisfied with result of diet(lack of result?)

To start with, the meals I ordered were void of taste because of too little spices such as cumin and saffron. You failed to mention that during deliver courses get cold. As if it was not bad the supplier weren’t be on time.

I am disappointed that “Kim’s wonder diet” weren’t work. As a result I put on weight two kilos. Moreover, your advertisement was misleading as if someone/ somebody(?) “join now” paid only for half meals. It were contrary to what was highlighted in your advertisement.

Finally, when I phoned to get some information I was shocked that none of worker picked up the phone and answerphone were switched on all the time.

I would be grateful if you deal with this matter immediately. I hope that you will give this matter your attention. I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,
Ann Sanders.

I am 'writting' (ortog) to make a complaint about 'your’s' YOUR advertisement „Kim’s Wonder diet” posted 'on' (zle slowo) (brak przedimka) news paper. I am dissatisfied with (przedimek) result of (przedimek) diet.

To start with, the meals I ordered were DEvoid of taste because of 'too little' (niepotr) spices such as cumin and saffron (were NOT used in sufficient quantities) . You failed to mention that during (przedimek) 'deliver' (tutaj rzeczownik) (przedimek) courses get cold. As if it was not bad (enough) the supplier 'weren’t be' (co to za dziwactwo wypisujesz? Napisz to w calosci) on time.

I am disappointed that “Kim’s wonder diet” 'weren’t' (co to ma byc? Kto Cie uczy takich pojec?) work. As a result I put on (2 kilos) IN weight. 'two kilos' (niepotr). Moreover, your advertisement was misleading as if somebody joinED now THEY paid only for half (przedimek) meals. 'It were' (od kiedy - przeciez 'it' tp 3os.l. poj - dlaczego trzeba to Ci przypominac?) contrary to what was highlighted in your advertisement.

Finally, when I phoned to get some information I was shocked that none of (przedimek) 'workerS' (daj lepsze slowo, np 'customer services personnel') picked up the phone and (przedimek) answerphone 'were' (dlaczego dajesz l. mn czasownika do l. poj rzeczownika??) switched on all the time.

I would be grateful if you 'deal' (zly czas) with this matter immediately. 'I hope that you will give this matter your attention' (zdanie niepotr bo znaczy tyle co poprzednie).