Proszę o sprawdzenie.

My name is Peter. I was born in nineteen hundred and eighty-seven in Poznan. His education started in elementary school 7th Then I graduated high school. I graduated from engineering studies at Higher Vocational School in Kalisz. This year I graduated from the Poznań University of Technology Faculty of mechanical engineering.I have two brothers. They have the name of Martin, Jared. They are older than me. My hobby is swimming, fishing and home improvement. I really like to drive a car. I have a driving license for two thousand and five. I have a small red car.I want to gain experience in the profession. I want to learn English. In the past, I learned English, but had to stop because I worked and studied. I had no time to learn English. Now I want to change that and start to learn English again.

Proszę o wyrozumiałość :). Kiedyś "liznąłem" ang., ale właściwie teraz to jestem samoukiem.

I was born in 'nineteen hundred and eighty-seven' (to piszemy 1987) in Poznan. 'His' (dlaczego napisales 'jego' - czy o kogos innego chodzi?) education started in elementary school '7th' (to jest niepotr, jak chcesz juz o tym mowic, to 'number 7 elementary school)
I graduated (daj tutaj date ...in 2xxxx) from 'engineering studies at' (nie, daj to na koncu) THE Higher Vocational School in Kalisz IN (eng. studies). This year I graduated (mozesz napisac, obtained my BSc., from the Poznań University of Technology IN THE Faculty of Mechanical Engineering.
They 'have the name of' (niepotre - wystarczy 'are') Martin AND Jared.
I really like 'to drive' (nie, tutaj 'driving') a car. I 'have' (nie, tutaj nie 'mam' w jez. polskim, tylko 'obtained'-dostalem w jez. ang) a driving license 'for' (niepotr) 'two thousand and five' (2005). I want to gain experience in 'the profession' (ale jaka? driving?).

mozna tez imiona braci przylaczyc do zdania I have two brothers.