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Subject:Coraz więcej młodych ludzi decyduję się na studiowanie równocześnie na dwóch kierunkach.

More and more young people decide to study two subjects in the same time. Almost all universities allow to students participate in double courses. Although there are many benefits of studying simultaneously tho subjects, there are also some drawback involved.
The major advantage of studying two subjects is receiving better education in shorter time. For instance when student do just one course he can have worst job than student who completed two. In addition to this future worker have more comfortable situation to choose better paid job and less harder. Moreover, having done education faster person can have family and bulid their own house faster that others
However for every plus there is a minus.
The most important disadvantage is fatigue. When someone try to study on two directions he is very tired because he must prepare to twice more exams. What is more, spending more time learning is having less spare time. Hardly do they realize that they can lose friends or even the family forget about you. Nevertheless, if people want study two fields of study in Poland they must pay for it because the government do not pick up the tab.
All thing considered, it may be sometime risky to choose that way to study. I personally strongly believe that if someone is able to do that he can whatever he wants to and I think the positives aspects outweigh the negatives ones.

Będę bardzo wdzięczna za ukazanie błędów które są naprawde rażące, dzięki z góry! :)

More and more young people decide to study two subjects 'in' AT the same time. Almost all universities allow 'to' (nie rozumiem dlaczego tu dalas 'to') students TO participate in 'double' (moze dalabym 'multiple') courses. Although there are many benefits of studying simultaneously ''tho' (ortog) subjects' (ale daj to przed 'simultaneously), there are also some drawback involved.
The major advantage of studying two subjects is receiving 'better' (dziwne slowo tutaj, jak sie studiuje jeden to tez chyba jest dobrze') education in (przedimek) shorter (brak 2 slowa) time. For instance when (przedimek) student 'do' (zle slowo) just one course he can have (przedimek) (tu cos brak) worst job than (przedimek) student who completed two (ale co?). In addition to this (przedimek) future worker 'have' (zle slowo) (przedimek) (ja bym to zrobila inaczej...is in a far better) 'more comfortable' (niepotr) situation to choose (przedimek) better paid job 'and less harder' (cos tu nie tak, nie rozumiem tego). Moreover, 'having done' (za bardzo kolokw jak dla mnie) education faster, (przedimek) person can have (przedimek) family and 'bulid' (ortog) their own house faster that others.
When someone 'try' (zle slowo) to study 'on' AT two 'directions' (nie, leeij uzyj slowo 'faculties') he is very tired because he must prepare 'to twice more' (cos tu nie tak) exams. What is more, spending more time learning 'is' (nie, daj 'means') having less spare time.
'Hardly do they realize' (bardzo dziwne zdanie) that they can lose friends or even the family (cos brak) forget about 'you' (dlaczego 'they' a pozniej 'you'?). Nevertheless, if people want TO study two fields of study in Poland they must pay for it because the government doES not pick up the tab.
All thingS considered, it may be 'sometime risky' (zla kol slow) to choose that way 'to' (zle slowo) 'study' (zle slowo). I personally strongly believe that if someone is able to do that he can DO whatever he wants to and I think the positives aspects outweigh the negatives ones.

W niektórych zdaniach, które zaznaczyłaś jest po prostu użyty schemat, np "Hardly do they relize..." jest inwersją, którą kazał nam stosować nauczyciel. a wyrażenie "having done" myślałam że jest formalne, ale dzięki że mnie wyprowadziłaś z błędu, na maturze rtak nie napiszę. Ogólnie chyba trochę problem ze słownictwem mam, moze jeszcze popracuję do czwartku nad tym. Dzięki za sprawdzenie! :)

z tym ...Hardly ever...to jest ok, tylko myslalam ze nie wiesz co to jest.
Having 'done' (to za bardzo prymitywne...lepiej undertaken...) education faster, a person