List formalny.

Byłabym wdzęczna za sprawdzenie mi listu formlanego, w którym miałam zapytać o:
- the price per person or per house?
- book - how early?
- addictional charge for electricty and gas?
- my own bed linen?


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to enquire about the offer in “Ireland’s Leading Holiday Home Rentals” that I recently saw advertised on a leaflet.

I am planning a holiday there and I am looking for some not too much expensive place to stay, so I would be grateful for informations about the price of a cottage and how early I could book.
Secondly, I need to know if there are additional charge for electricity and gas, because I am planning spend this holiday with my family, so is very important tip for me.

I would be very appreciative if you could also let me know if I get my own bed linen.
I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your help.

Yours faithfully,
XXX

I am planning a holiday there and I am looking for some 'not too much expensive' (to jest blad) place to stay, so I would be grateful for (tu cos brak) 'informations' (zle slowo) about the price of a cottage and how early I could book.
Secondly, I need to know if there are additional 'charge' (zle slowo) for electricity and gas, because I am planning (cos brak) spend this holiday with my family, so (cos brak) is very important 'tip' (zle slowo) for me.

I would be very 'appreciative' (nie uzylaym tego, wystarczy 'grateful') if you could also let me know if I get my own bed linen.